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If I love you
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If I love you |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 If I love you You always ask me if I love you But haven't you sense my warm embrace When I hold you within my eyes Loveshine brighten up my face You always ask me if I love you But haven't you experience my tender touch While I take your fears away Once that dark shadows approach You always ask me if I love you But haven't you taste my heart and soul When I guide you into my sweetness Giving you my precious whole You always ask me if I love you But haven't you viewed my innermost It shows gently my care for you And where I have your name embossed My love for you is always around So don't doubt about my devotion I am the air that you inhale suit your skin like silky lotion I will be there in every way Don't doubt whatever may cross our way cause my love for you grows every day. Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 01-28-2001).] |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
 I can't imagine there is any room left for doubt here. It seems your words and your actions both speak clearly.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Yes, but sometimes I want to hear him say "I LOVE YOU"! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This is wonderful Charisma...very tenderly, lovingly written. I assure you, there is not doubt in this mind. jwesley |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
A beautiful way to make your feelings known. Your wording and imagery are wonderful. Thanks for sharing. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh Charisma I love to feel it and when I hear the words spoken it softens my heart..yes of course we want to hear those precious words...over and over and over...they are words of appreciation...they are words of life...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, I'm sure it does and you said it very well. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful Charisma. . . just wonderful. . . I really liked this one from you. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Charisma, Beautifully penned. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma~ I love this! Fantastic -SEA |
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Tammy16 Junior Member
since 2000-11-26
Posts 21 |
Charisma - what a great way to say how much you love. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
kcsgrandma: Sometimes we need to show without words.....I love you, three simple words,easy said... but they contain allot of feelings...and emotions. Inot2B: oh I do too...we need those words, to confirm the love that is around. but there are times that those words unsaid showing more warmth and love than said. Jwesley: thank you my friend, its always a pleasure to read your kind comments. LoveBug: it was my pleasure to share my words and feelings with all of you, thank you for reading. jmlee: yeah I agree with you my friend. Seymour: thank you my friend Sven: may I thank you for the wonderful...I'm glad that you liked these one from me. Poeminister: thank you too my friend, its always nice to have your kind comments. Sea: thank you my dear friend, for the fantastic... Tammy16: thank you, and I 'm glad that you feel it that way too. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
So many wonderful lines - I think I best loved "hold you within my eyes" - strange isn't it that we seem to seek reassurance so much... = perhaps we ask it more from poets - because they respond like you do - with more than words: Poetry! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely words Charisma...it is a shame when someone doubts your love for no reason at all...after you have showed them in every way possible..enjoyed HUGS~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Wilfred: well thank you for your kind words,and I take that as a compliment as I know that you are writing great poety....and I think that we all need the reassurance from time to time... Vandana: and I am glad that you enjoyed it my friend. Victoria: yeah....but I also understand...we are all human being and need sometimes to hear the words too.....thank you for passing by. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Charisma, beautiful expression of your love and devotion to your love...great piece! Nathan |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Nate Dog: thank you for your kind words... :) [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 02-01-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is a gorgeous message of true love to the one you love, sweet friend, may your love forever be free of doubt and worry and together may you celebrate all you are thankful for together! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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