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nona Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 139Fla |
IF ONLY If only I had told you all the things I had to say I rehearsed them in my mind so many times each day. But never seemed to find the right time to really say there was always something that kept getting in the way Now it is too late you see for you have gone away Maybe if I'd said them you would still be here today But now you've gone and I am lonely repeating over in my mind.......IF ONLY nona this is a repost that got lost sometime ago.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Reposts are great! The "if only" will soon change to "been there, done that, moving forward...." it will happen... good job... |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Boy, do I understand this. But, everything happens for a reason, at least, that's what I say to keep sane.  Great write, nona! sp  I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
Heh... totally relate to this one... ~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~ |
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nona Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 139Fla |
Thanks Snowpants and Enchantress for you replies... I have a post also in Prose that kinda goes with this poem titled "Dynamics In The Waiting Room" nona. [This message has been edited by nona (edited 01-20-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I am a big "if only" and "what if" kinda gal.......I felt this and know it well. I'm glad you reposted it! -SEA |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Aww.....I have had to go through this and it is hard. Eventually you will walk with peace though. Good luck.Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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nona Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 139Fla |
Thanks Sea and Saunni for you feedback ..May you never have any IF ONLY moments in you life..nona [This message has been edited by nona (edited 01-21-2001).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I like it a lot |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Well written piece about an age old problem. May your trip past this just be quick enough. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Nona, Even if this is a repost, it is very beautiful. I did enjoy reading this writing. BC |
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nona Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 139Fla |
Thanks Van, Vas and Bill for validating my words this was just one of those that just rolled out the end of my pencil one day I just held it in place... nona [This message has been edited by nona (edited 01-21-2001).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Simply said and well written. Expressed the way all feel at one time or another, me thinks. Mucho enjoyed. jwesley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Have done this myself a few times and all is not lost because important lessons are learned and we usually improve our peformance the next time and the new one benefits from out appreciation and desire...we will never do it perfectly...it will just be the right moment and the right opportunity....James |
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nona Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 139Fla |
Gosh me thinks I hit a "nerve" here with all the replys...Makes me feel very humble that I got such an important message across...Thanks for your feed back jwesley and jmlee and all of you. Being a very novice writer it gives me courage to attempt more....nona |
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