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Becoming One Again
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Becoming One Again |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Once two became one Then fate laughed its bitter laugh One is one again |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
So much feeling in such few words, it just oozes with pain and sadness. Take care my friend! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula love, beautifully written. Hugs and more Take care love Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You write my feelings In such a few words Liz |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Compact and full of emotion....a great job here  Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
as the others have said..so much power packed into this little punch.. get it all out my friend..scream and yell and rant and rave..we're listenin... hugs...g "oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens |
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Frankie Member
since 2001-01-10
Posts 57 |
Paula - This has a bitter ring to it.....short and to the point. Frankie |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Paula, Rage on! Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
....... WOW! .......... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
A bullet of pure heartache.......hugs to you - SEA |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Paula, So much in so little. Take it easy, take it slow, one step at a time goes a very long way to happiness. Remember, I am here. Cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Just a *hug*, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
EagleOne...thank you sweet friend I appreciate your concern for me Marsha...love and hugs to you too sweetheart Elizabeth...I knwow you understand this better than most thank you Pepper...its good to see you again thanks dgvarner...you have been so kind to me and I appreciate it more than I can say... thank you Frankie...if you only knew what seeing your name does...bitter? yes I suppose Keth...yes rage on...til the rage is gone and all thats left are silent tears...thanks sweetie Doreen...thank you Sea...its like a splinter you cant get at...sharp and unexpected Daniel...yes I know you are here and it means a lot to me thanks Marge...your hugs mean more than I can say...thank you I want to take this opportunity to thank all of my friends who have held me close at this time...special thanks to Marsha Kethry Serenity and dgvarner for your constant support and comfort your words have provided...thank you just doesnt say it but its all I have to offer...THANK YOU |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Paula these few words express so much sadness...warm hugs from my heart for you...James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James...yes sad very much so...I know you understand thanks |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Great work, Paula! Wonderfully expressed! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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