Open Poetry #12 |
Cherokee Turning |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cherokee Turning ~*Marge Tindal*~ Oh, Cherokee sing your song astride a horse of paint Night of moonless sky across the valley from over hill I hear you still ~ Cherokee guardian of this night overlooks earth and her plight Knowing not when the time shall be-for the rising of the old Cherokee Watch and wait the hour is late ~ Draw ye nigh from the flood River red with the blood of the great Cherokee Along the trail he still cries the wail of the Cherokee in me ~ Turning<~~>Turning<~~>Turning Will they never be learning Stand down Great Spirit tend the burning fire It is now embered forever to be remembered Spirit Fires of ancient Cherokee <~> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
oh Marge--You burn with cherokee fire. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
visions of the fire's sparks reaching up into the sky, carried on the wind...to the ears of the spirits...great visuals, wonderful graphics, forever words... you do it all... and you leave my heart flayed open... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Margie~ The cherokee spirit still runs wildly and strongly in you, let it out for all to see. enjoy these Margie, give us more please ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Marge you have out done yourself this time. I remember watching old western shows and them talking about the "Cherokee Trail of Tears". What a dishonor we did to these people. They are not forgotten as long as we have you!!! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ Beautiful presentation.......amazing beauty in your words.......stunning! -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ The fire fairly dances in their memory. Karilea~ The spirit offers - I accept and share. Tracie~ Oh, there will always be another, hon. INot2B~ You warm my heart with remembering. SEA~ Pleased you enjoyed, friend. *Thank you all for your lovely thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh yes, how wonderful. I so love the visions you share with me. I fall so perfectly into them receiving the feast that you have prepared for me. Wonderful. thank you. Much love and hugs from me to you. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well, I guess it is time to go frame shopping again isn't it? Thank you for sharing your burning spirit with us my friend. This was truely wonderful to read. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ Just knowing you appreciate the gifts I give is a blessing to my soul. Thank you. MarkB~ Always, my heart thanks you for yours. Love you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
Incredible Maiden<> These words were forever in your heart<> Now they are here for all to see<> mea aroha |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Oustanding Marge....fabulous spirit of the Cherokee have inspired you. love it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SoaringEagle~ Oh, my sweet Warrior ~ You lift my spirits and hold me in safe keeping. I'm eternally grateful to you and for you. Charisma~ Yes, it is so. Thank you so very much for your reply, sweet friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"Along the trail he still cries the wail of the Cherokee in me" Marge, this touched me deeply. As you know, I have Cherokee blood, and this poem really struck a deep chord with me. May the Great Spirit always be with you! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Awww.....this is remarkable! I don't realy have the words, Marge...You are are wonderful writer. Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoveBug~ That same Cherokee Spirit calls to you ~ Listen to his voice on the wind ~ *Hugs* to you, my sister. Saunni~ Thank you for thinking so - The Great Spirit delivers the visions ~ I've only to pen them and send them on for sharing. ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 01-21-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
YOUR SO COOOOL!! MC and I were talking about this beauty on phone yesterday... excellent writing and presentation Margie-girl awesome write... your Cherokee muses are amazing and now they join the others of yours in me library way cool When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ I can't think of a nicer compliment than to know that two poet friends, that I love and admire, would talk about this offering. I am humbly honored, my sweet friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Marge, Your emotions are obvious here. There must be a deep well of feeling within you for this subject. This was quite powerful. David2 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Wow, this is a great poem! I am much Cherokee blood, for many of my ancestors were Cherokee Indians. This poem moved me very much! Excellent poem, my friend, thank you for sharing, and let that flame burn deep inside each of our souls with love and grace! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Wonderful read Marge..my great great grandfather on my fathers side married a native american. He was a captain and met her.She lived with her tribe along the Delaware river..I am from Delaware..and her name was Ester DeerFoot..so i have native american blood in me. My mother had a pic of her but has since lost it..So i did get to see her..Enjoyed very much Marge ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful Marge. Still trying to reach as deep as you in the spirit of your Native American writings...probably never will as will never attain your perspective or closeness. Again. beautifully done. BTW...is that a painting, statue, or combination of the two...are copies of it obtainable? jwesley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David2~ *Smiling* and thanking you. Yes, a 'deep well of feeling' would describe it nicely. Noah~ O'Siyo, my brother. I'd like to see you search the visions of your Indian bloodlines. The flame burns eternally. Victoria~ O'Siyo, my sister. You should search your Indian roots. The Delaware were a prod tribe of people. Thank you so much for the reply and your comments. JWesley~ Keep reaching, my friend. You do us honor. Thank you. *sent e-mail info regarding the graphic Still searching. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
You are truly a master of these, Marge. Wonderful and the graphics, WOW! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VAS~ It's pleasing to know you enjoyed it. The spiritual awareness of my ancestors has such a calm serenity for me. It's nice to touch others with the visions. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Marge~ Your ancestors would be very proud of this! Both your magical words and the presentation is stunning. Please submit this for the next Passion's "Voices On The Web" Book Take care, Melissa< !signature--> The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 01-21-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Thank you so much for your words of encouragement. I enjoy writing and sharing with the wonderful poets in this family of friends. Yes, when the next one comes about, perhaps I will do just that. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great work Marge just fabulous! I really love these works of native expression they are so much a part of the very earth itself! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great work Marge just fabulous! I really love these works of native expression they are so much a part of the very earth itself! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful, brilliant, and superior, is all I can sya about this Marge...you've truly outdone yourself, Marge.....this is a truly remarkable and well-crafted piece...take care....peace! Nathan |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is absolutely beautiful and a tribute to your heritage. Kathleen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ You know that I appreciate your love for these pieces. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your encouragement. Nate, my friend~ I am so pleased to share it with you and other friends. Thank you so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
once more you capture the great souls of the Cherokee.......great write as only you can do from a Metis who loves a Cherokee who loves the Seminoles?? imagine that?? |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
May this spirit that guides you always lift you on the wings of eagles, so you may soar among the clouds. Beautiful piece Marge. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SoaringEagle~ Awwww ! The love so gently flows. *Hugging you, my ~Warrior~ of great delight.* I love you. GO 'NOLES ! Mysteria~ Thank you so much, sweet lady. I love to share my heritage writing. What a privilege it is to be blessed with the presence of the Spirits in my heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
This is very artfully penned, Marge. This was such a delight and it goes into my library!! thanks sweet lady! hugs, Koko Passion,imagination |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
I liked this a lots. My great-grandfather was full bloodied Cherokee. I inheritied the high cheek bones. Red |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: This is so stirring and conjures up images of ancient times and trials for the Cherokee Nation. I really like the format also. Betty Lou Hebert |
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