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Honeybee
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0 posted 2001-01-09 10:54 AM




~Laughter's Wings~


Soft voices in the distance whisper "let souls be as one"... "let hearts unite"
and for one magical night, we are together as it was meant to be,
our love gathers the winds
as emotions fly us through the air
on magic carpets woven with laughter, joy and care,
we leave behind pain, loneliness and confusion
as the world around us dissapears for a moment's time

We caress under the moonlight
whils't stars burn with intensity
shining in your eyes as you look deep into mine -
their sparkling reflections of pure love lasting touches the depths of all that I am
experiencing the wonder of the wind's breath of freedom

We fly past crashing waves of crystal blue
mesmerized by it's thunderous applause
for the eternal flame found within me and you,
your laughter echoes through time and space
returning to sing lullabies in my ears,
your breath upon my face
send my spirit into reveries,
your lips touch mine -
seduced by the sweet taste of your kiss,
there, we soar intoxicated within the dance of passion's bliss,
the wind blows through my hair
as your fingers gently graze my skin
sending rushes of pleasure and chills through my soul,
oh enraptured am I of you!
captivated by a knight forever true,
we fly through the night and into the morn
as our love carries us away
to the very ends of the day
to watch the beauty of the sunset's colours make love amidst the horizon
as we glide on laughter's wings


*By Melissa Honeybee*
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The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams




[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 01-09-2001).]

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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2001-01-09 11:15 AM


What beautiful imagery! I could see the whole scene. I think this would be a great poem to use on Valentine's Day (and no I'm NOT jumping the gun on the holiday, that's what I thought when I read this). Anyway, Melissa, well done.
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2 posted 2001-01-09 01:04 PM


Beautiful imaging, beautiful dream.  Oh, if we could really do/experience all of which you write.
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3 posted 2001-01-09 11:02 PM


Melissa~
How very pretty !
~*Marge*~


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4 posted 2001-01-10 12:51 PM


HONEYBEE, this poem is sooooooo capitivating...

Thank you for this most enjoyable read
coco

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5 posted 2001-01-12 09:06 AM


Melissa, this one needs to fly a little longer...it is lovely...
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6 posted 2002-03-28 05:10 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your beautiful words always shines with loves laughter! (kiss on cheek) May loves laughter forever be shared with the knight of your dreams, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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