Mother Earth...repost from #10 with extra verse

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Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

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0 posted 2001-01-12 05:56 PM

Mother Earth

Reach me your hand and I will guide you,
through all my beauty and wonderful hue,
I'll show you my weakness and maybe my harm,
and bathe you into my natural charm.

Come and join me up in the sky,
where God's creatures freely can fly,
see the majestic eagle or a simple insect,
they all deserves your sincerest respect.

Follow me into the mighty wilderness,
experience this world without all the stress,
where animals hunt, necessary for their survive,
here you will find the circle of life.

Let me show you the marvelous world undersea,
filled with awesome beauty and also mystery,
whales and planktons drifting on a tidal wave,
even more natural treasures, all needed to save.

Open your eyes when I show you around,
watch all the beauty that grow on the ground,
the flowers, the trees need some attention from you,
they deliver clean air that is simply the truth.

Close your eyes and inhale the air,
this air is what we got to share,
all life need it badly to expire,
rather clean than dirty is the require.

Don't fill this world with your chemical trash,
don't abuse the wealth, don't make it a mess,
It's your responsibility to treat nature,
with your power of reason and love for the future.

If you love your children than you will make it worth,
to save nature in the name of Mother Earth.

Charisma

[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 01-12-2001).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-01-12 07:07 PM

Charisma~

this is so beautiful

-SEA

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

2 posted 2001-01-12 07:13 PM

Charisma, is a brilliant, beautiful, creative, and thought-provoking verse you've written here....thanks for the read and may I say, Mohter earth, you're totally right!

Nathan

Beckalini
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since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

3 posted 2001-01-12 07:27 PM

*Applause* Well said Charisma! Hear, hear! Beautiful delivery of an important message. Well done

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-01-12 07:35 PM

Charisma,

This is fabulous and so true. The world is what we make it and in my opinion we can do much better than we have. Nice writing my friend.

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

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5 posted 2001-01-13 03:26 PM

SEA: thank you my friend

Nate: I am glad that you agree with it, we reach for the moon, but forget to treasure our homeplace, thank you for your comment

Beckaline: thank you for your lovely comment on this message..

Lone Wolf: yeah, I agree with you, the wealth and future lay in our hands. thank you for your passing by.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-03-28 05:15 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Charisma, I couldn't agree with you more, sweet friend, but it always saddens me to see so many others not listening and they only destroy what can be mortgaged for our children and their children and the future that Mother Nature has to offer us all! (kiss on cheek) This is sad but beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much, I join you in Mother Natures prayers! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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