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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-01-18 05:25 PM





Golden Path

Bliss of heaven found
inside daydreams of twilight
flowing with the night
within the journey of love
while tracing a golden path

Charisma





[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 01-19-2001).]

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SEA
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Wow Charisma......beautiful!   -SEA
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2 posted 2001-01-18 05:34 PM


very pretty!
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3 posted 2001-01-18 05:50 PM



~Lovely!~

Take care,
Melissa


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



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4 posted 2001-01-18 06:11 PM


Beautiful tanka.  Very nicely penned.

Poeminister

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5 posted 2001-01-18 06:23 PM


Beautifully written..and the picture makes a wonderful complement for your words
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6 posted 2001-01-18 07:13 PM


You are so great at these sweet, tender pieces.  You select the perfect photos as well to accompany them.  OR  do you by any chance select the photo and let it write itself onto the page through your perceptive eyes?
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7 posted 2001-01-18 07:14 PM


What a perfect match, Charisma and it's beautiful.  So beautiful.

Kathleen


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8 posted 2001-01-20 10:33 AM


Sea: thank you for the *wow*  

Sunshine: thank you  

Melissa : Im glad that you love it.

Poeminister: thank you for your wonderful reply

Vas: I love good photography....they inspire me all the time, and when I met this one, my pen translated the words of my feelings than. and well the Tanka above was born.

Irish: thank you for my friend, Im glad that you liked it all.

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9 posted 2001-01-23 12:59 PM


Charisma, you have such talent in these tankas you write...
The beauty of your heart softly speaks thru your poety on screen
And I must say I read this tanka twice and it shined in brillance of an eloquent write...
Hugs2uPoetFriend
*~coco~*

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10 posted 2001-01-23 05:37 AM


your tankas are always a pleasure to read
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11 posted 2001-01-23 04:41 PM


Coco: thank you for your lovely reply, I appreciate them very highly as knowing that you are one fabulous poet, my friend...hugs right back at ya  

Kaile: I am so glad that you enjoyed the tanka's...thank you for taking time to read and for your lovely reply...I appreciate it always.


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12 posted 2002-03-30 04:44 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I agree that you always have the most gorgeous pictures to go with your golden words! (kiss on cheek) May love always bade welcome to you with theese warm tropical colors, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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