Open Poetry #12 |
Golden Path...Tanka |
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Golden Path Bliss of heaven found inside daydreams of twilight flowing with the night within the journey of love while tracing a golden path Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 01-19-2001).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wow Charisma......beautiful! -SEA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
very pretty! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Lovely!~ Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful tanka. Very nicely penned. Poeminister |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
Beautifully written..and the picture makes a wonderful complement for your words |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
You are so great at these sweet, tender pieces. You select the perfect photos as well to accompany them. OR do you by any chance select the photo and let it write itself onto the page through your perceptive eyes? |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
What a perfect match, Charisma and it's beautiful. So beautiful. Kathleen |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sea: thank you for the *wow* Sunshine: thank you Melissa : Im glad that you love it. Poeminister: thank you for your wonderful reply Vas: I love good photography....they inspire me all the time, and when I met this one, my pen translated the words of my feelings than. and well the Tanka above was born. Irish: thank you for my friend, Im glad that you liked it all. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Charisma, you have such talent in these tankas you write... The beauty of your heart softly speaks thru your poety on screen And I must say I read this tanka twice and it shined in brillance of an eloquent write... Hugs2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
your tankas are always a pleasure to read |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Coco: thank you for your lovely reply, I appreciate them very highly as knowing that you are one fabulous poet, my friend...hugs right back at ya Kaile: I am so glad that you enjoyed the tanka's...thank you for taking time to read and for your lovely reply...I appreciate it always. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I agree that you always have the most gorgeous pictures to go with your golden words! (kiss on cheek) May love always bade welcome to you with theese warm tropical colors, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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