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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-01-22 02:16 PM





Natures Bliss

Intimate moment
when earth and heaven conflux
in attractive kiss
dilute colours of nature
melting with natural bliss


Charisma






[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 01-23-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-01-22 02:41 PM


"when earth and heaven conflux"...

Wonderful!

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2 posted 2001-01-22 04:10 PM


Charisma,
Very nice I enjoyed.

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3 posted 2001-01-22 11:18 PM


Very nice!
Enjoyed the read

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4 posted 2001-01-22 11:26 PM


I like this muchly.  Lovely tanka.

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thank you all for your wonderful comments..I'm truly happy that you enjoyed the read of these simple Tanka.

Charisma

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6 posted 2001-02-12 05:34 PM


...melting with natural bliss

Oh boy. Beautiful, simply beautiful.

Geir

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7 posted 2001-02-13 11:05 AM


Beautiful, Charisma......very good poem!

Nathan

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8 posted 2001-02-13 12:27 PM


Lovely, lovely!

so terribly curious as to where the pic was taken

love the gray hues of it

the image and the poem both a reflection of nature's mural

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9 posted 2002-03-28 06:34 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always paint the colors of the skies and nature together so dazzling! (kiss on cheek) This is a true masterpiece, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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