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Open Poetry #12

Natures Bliss......Tanka

Charisma

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0 posted 2001-01-22 02:16 PM

Natures Bliss

Intimate moment
when earth and heaven conflux
in attractive kiss
dilute colours of nature
melting with natural bliss

Charisma

[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 01-23-2001).]

Sunshine

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1 posted 2001-01-22 02:41 PM

"when earth and heaven conflux"...

Wonderful!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-01-22 04:10 PM

Charisma,
Very nice I enjoyed.

insect
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3 posted 2001-01-22 11:18 PM

Very nice!
Enjoyed the read

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

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Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-01-22 11:26 PM

I like this muchly. Lovely tanka.

Poeminister

Charisma

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lost in blue pages

5 posted 2001-01-23 07:15 AM

thank you all for your wonderful comments..I'm truly happy that you enjoyed the read of these simple Tanka.

Charisma

FlyHigh
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6 posted 2001-02-12 05:34 PM

...melting with natural bliss

Oh boy. Beautiful, simply beautiful.

Geir

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"Luck affects everything. Let your hook always be cast; in the stream where you least expect it there will be a fish."
Ovid (BC 43-18 AD)

Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton

7 posted 2001-02-13 11:05 AM

Beautiful, Charisma......very good poem!

Nathan

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8 posted 2001-02-13 12:27 PM

Lovely, lovely!

so terribly curious as to where the pic was taken

love the gray hues of it

the image and the poem both a reflection of nature's mural

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-03-28 06:34 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always paint the colors of the skies and nature together so dazzling! (kiss on cheek) This is a true masterpiece, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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