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I Remember |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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........for Sharon. I remember! The softness of your touch…….....The spark ~*~ The longing in your eyes……..…..The glow ~*~ The hunger of your soul…..………..The fire ~*~ The ache of your body…..……….The blaze ~*~ The intentness of your passion….The inferno ~*~ Yes! I remember you! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
EagleOne, How could anyone forget with those words ringing in your ears. Brilliant! write on, love's song Kethry. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ Oh, my ! ... what a beauty this is ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Seemingly so simply said, but there is a depth within this piece that is moving. Enjoyed the read very much.  With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This kind of remembering is very,VERY good.....I liked this a lot! -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
heres to remembering and recapturing ... very cool write poet sir ... so nice to see you back  When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
loved reading it. like it very much Charisma |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
This is so sad, but so beautiful. I love your style. Glad y'all are back, also. Hugs, ann |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* your memories are incredibly beautiful. Wonderful. Thank you for the read. Much love and hugs from me to you. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
And such a fiery reminsce it is! Well expressed in few words. I really enjoyed this. Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well said sir. This was written with alot of conviction and strength in caring and then wrapped up in a superb write. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
what a great memory! Kathleen |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Kethry ~ your comments are, as always, too kind, thankyou my friend. Marge ~ Thanks, always wonderful to know you enjoy my work. Dragonpoe ~ So glad you enjoyed., and I like your thoughts on this one too. I like to think most of my work has that depth you speak of. SEA ~ SO glad you liked. and yes I do have some good memories, thankyou.Janet ~ it's nice to be back, and to be able to get something on paper again. I think that trying to recapture a memory would be like trying to capture the past, that can be a road laced with pain. I think I'd rather move forward and make new memories. Thankyou my friend.Charisma ~ Thankyou, I'm glad you like this one. Mother Earth ~ I don't see it as sad, just as a beautiful memory from times past, thankyou. Startime ~ well my memories aren't always beautiful but it's nice to recall them from time to time. Thankyou Melissa ~ I'm a man of few words Thanks, glad you enjoyed.Mark ~ your words do me great honour sir! Thankyou. Kathleen ~ yes it is I appreciate your stopping by to comment, take care!"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
EagleOne...this is lovely...and you know how I feel about new memories...hugs to you |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
EagleOne, The memories will always remain. It is good to look back every now and then, isn't it? This was very nice my friend. Jennifer Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Paula ~ Thankyou, yes we do need to move on and find those new memories. Jennifer ~ Thankyou my friend, I think we need to look back on occiasions in order for us to move forward. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Awww, this is really beautiful! You have a way with words. Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
EAGLE..how awesome it must be to be remembered for such beauty wonderfully sweet and romantic hugs, g "i was thinkin' if you were lonely maybe we could leave here and no one would know at least not to the point where we would think so..." |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Sauni ~ Thanks for stopping by to add your thoughts, glad you enjoyed. g ~ I guess the memories will always be there! Thanks, glad you liked it. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
A lot can be expressed in few words. Nicely written. |
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Iwritethepoems Junior Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 25 |
such wonderful words ..in verse. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This E,...is Gorgeous! *Peace. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Mike ~ Yes it can be, and for the most part I feel that fits me just fine. Iwritethepoems ~ Thankyou, glad you enjoyed. Vandana ~ Glad you enjoyed this one, thanks! SpitFire ~ Thankyou my friend, always a pleasure to have you stop by. You take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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