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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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When night falls Softly I hear you……. As the wind blows gently through the trees Softly Memories caress my cheek Trailing fingers of reminiscing along my neck Softly Allowing me the pleasure of your touch Even though you aren't really there………but you are Softly Tears come, but not for sorrow They come for love Softly Remembering you ~SEA~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
SEA--I love this...its soft and soothing. Beautiful write. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
PM~ thank you for always finding time to read my poetry....you make me smile, and that is wonderful to me, thank you  -SEA |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sea, I'm jealous...I should have written this! But I'm glad you did - that gave me the pleasure of reading it. Beautiful. jwesley |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe love, this is utterly wonderful, it truly is outstanding. On the understanding that less is indeed more, this is SUPERB I really love this one and you know that I know  Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Now this has a beautiful flow! These lines were exceptional: "memories caress my cheek trailing fingers of reminiscing along my neck softly allowing me the pleasure of your touch even though you aren't really there...but you are softly" Wow! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
SEA, I cannot compliment you enough for this beautifully spun web of softly intriguing words of love. You my dear friend is sparkle in my eyes as your poetry sends butterflies through me. Fantastic. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
shhhhhhhhhhhhhh. . . I'm listening. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ You know our spirits touch on this subject - What lovely moments of remember. Yes - yes ! I like this very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JWesley~ funny, I ususally think the same thing when I read yours thank you! Marsha~ thank you very much Melissa~ thank you, that is so nice! DJD~ butterflies through you......gosh, making me grin like a fool thank you for that!! Sven~ Marge~ yes, I like to think so I'm so glad you liked this! -SEA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo soft and gorgeous, sweet friend, may love forever whisper softly to your ears and fill your heart with delight! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are sooooo romantic! You have such a beautfiul heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 I feel this too |
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