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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Another night closer to recovery of myself, the one you boldly stole as you plundered my hopes, my plans, and all our combined desires, while leaving behind little broken pieces of my heart. Another night of persistent gathering of leftover bits of myself, attempted retrievel of sanity which works to escape me still. Yet I will survive in spite of you- despite your cruelty so tempered with passion. I will survive this bloody hell of desire only to endure it all again someday... [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 01-15-2001).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Someday he will kick himself hon.. love ya...HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Ahh, you've expressed the world of love very well...I must say that you're a strong woman too...wonderful write! Nathan |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Sandra, in the brief space your words occupy, you've given us the threads of unraveled passion, and desire. Captivating work! Robert Joseph |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
catalinamoon... This is such a sad peice from you... Seems like there's alot of this going around here these days.. Hope your hurt heals soon.. For no one deserves all this pain.. I really enjoyed this as I can relate to it much.. Hugs ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sing on Sandra. . . for I know that you will come through. . . shining again. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Catalina, You've captured the sorrow so perfectly. But I know, the Princess will rise again, even stronger than before, and he will be the one left wondering and lost in the sorrow. Love, Elise |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Just to get it out is a healing process, I believe, I trust that it is. God bless you. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is sooooooo powerfully heartfelt, sweet friend, my heart goes to you and I hope in the end this burning desire will be replaced with comfort and satisfaction! (kiss on cheek) This is sad but beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 me too! |
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