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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-01-15 09:54 PM


A man so able to produce
such works of brilliant art designed
caring for nothing but his muse
neglecting love which he could find.

He spends his days in fantasy
of morbid dark imaginings
when later, forced reality
leaves him with no love left to bring.

Dark mystery surrounds his art
and so it does his very soul
to her he could but scarce impart
the love he promised, now so cold..

© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-01-15 10:01 PM


Cat! Look at you...stretching like the feline you are! This is wonderful and I love it!
Mike
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2 posted 2001-01-15 11:15 PM


One of your best...nicely written and leaves no doubt as to your message... enjoyed.
Poeminister
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3 posted 2001-01-15 11:20 PM


Exceptional write. Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

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Sunnyone
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4 posted 2001-01-16 02:23 AM


Ah yes......the male artist can be dark, drawing his art out of his pain.......
But we know about that, don't we?  
Enjoyed this one to the hilt, my friend!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@



athena4
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5 posted 2001-01-16 06:18 PM


Catalina,
       You've said so much, and described so many.  Beautiful...
          Love, Elise

Sven
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6 posted 2001-01-16 06:51 PM


excellent Sandra. . . sometimes, the Muse takes our sight. . . well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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7 posted 2002-03-28 06:19 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is wonderful, sweet friend, may he pierce through all the darkness and find the light and faith to find all his heart desires with happiness! (big hugggssssss) This is a wonderful tribute to a fine poet, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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displaced
8 posted 2003-01-27 11:30 AM


ouch
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