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Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-01-16 02:53 PM

Fate

Love, spin, spin, the thread
Measure it and pleasure it
never put it down

Poeminister

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-01-16 02:56 PM

Ohhh yes, love this!

- SEA

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-01-16 03:04 PM

SEA--Thank you. Glad you liked.

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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-01-16 03:14 PM

The imagery is remarkable....and so like a fairy tale! Excellent!

Lady Lightning
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 422
Kentucky

4 posted 2001-01-16 09:35 PM

Poeminister...
This is so sweet...cute even...I liked it alot...!!! Hugs ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2001-01-16 09:44 PM

Wow, excellent haiku with a wonderful voice! Yes, may love forever spin and forever treasure our hearts! May love and light overcome all! Thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2001-01-17 01:08 AM

Love it, love it, love it!!!

I needed a short one cuz I gotta get off o' here, this was delightful and though senyru short, it was filled with volumes! A tome in a nutshell!

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

7 posted 2001-01-17 01:19 AM

POE, this is great and I enjoyed the read...
Thank you
*~coco~*

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

8 posted 2001-01-17 01:47 AM

Sunshine, Lady Lightening, Mistletoe, Virginia, and Coco, thank you all for your comments.

Poeminister

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Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

9 posted 2001-01-17 02:16 AM

Excellent senyru. I was truely impressed with the images that came through on this one and that is always a sure sign of success.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

10 posted 2001-01-17 05:26 AM

love the imagery inhere.....very well done.

((hugs))
Charisma

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

11 posted 2001-01-17 05:50 AM

I've made a mental note - when you write a senryu - It's worth the read - this is so telling in so few words

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

12 posted 2001-01-17 06:27 AM

I particularly liked this! So much, so well said so briefly!
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

13 posted 2001-01-17 07:33 AM

Love's s thread entwines hearts
Once beating separately
Two becoming one

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