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Keeper of the Keys
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Keeper of the Keys |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Keeper of the Keys Keeper of the Keys keeps my heart eternally love turns golden key writes my diary unlocks there the words of me love turns gold the key crosses the drawbridge unlocks the barred door to me love turns golden key Keeper of the Keys hold you safe this key of me welcome home my love 01.15.01 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetPoetGal~ You sure know how to unlock a memory or two. This is splendid. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Gracefully penned...I like! Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Splendid write...I like it! Nathan |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sunshine, your poem is entrancing... I could read this over and over again and well I shall by threading to my library... ThankU PoetFriend for this beautiful write *~coco~* |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I apologize for this double post but I came back to clic the library thread which I failed to clic before...  coco |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Simple and heartfelt.....that's the key.. This one sings,,,, |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nice. Enjoyed muchly. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Yes...love makes the key gold...lovely! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all for unlocking many wondrous moments for me here, in Passions...just my little way of saying you all hold beautiful keys in the tip of your pen, and in the weave of your thoughts... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, no you didn't you fibber, you had some sunshine to impart so you wrote this. I know me!! Utterly wonderful dear heart. As it always is. (And don't think you can fool me with this just a little gift malarkey I know this is pure gold)  Take care love Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I loved the way you blended the metaphoric keys with the mental pictures of maidens, castles, knights and drawbridges - at least that's how my Lancelot mind interpreted. Let down your hair I shall climb ~S~ [This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 01-16-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ah but Marsha...my only intent ever is to share...and that is all...well...perhaps shine just a little...LOL... Mr. Yeats...interpret away...if I can lend dreams of castles, then be free to be the Knight...{~,^}...thank you! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh these are wonderful penned...love it.... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you for the hugs Charisma...this likes me too.... |
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