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KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
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Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-03-25 01:25 AM





On Sunday morning
All the waves in purest white
kneeling on the beach

Steeples reach in praise
gatherers meet with a kiss
heavenly choirs singing

tradewinds journey fair
morning doves cry out love song
leopard clouds kiss blue

shadows hide at noon
sunbathers sizzle to brown
dancing azure waves


hammock on lanai
mango tango sherbet ice
slack key melodies


ominous gray clouds
packing suitcase comes to town
rainmakers showdown




Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko


[This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 03-25-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-03-25 02:51 AM


My Lord! I almost missed this - they moved to Forum 13 - come on Cheri - get over there! This was lovely and you made me jealous it is raining here. Beautiful as usual.
RMW
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2 posted 2001-03-25 10:50 AM


"...waves...kneeling on the beach." I can see that. Bob
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-03-25 02:23 PM


This is lovely Koko...I'm just about ready to go enjoy one of those Sundays...they say it will clear up this afternoon and me and some friends will be attempting a barbeque at Diamond Head...James
Mother_Earth
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4 posted 2001-03-25 09:15 PM


Koko, you are the first with the music and I will bet before the week is out Passions will be poetry with music! But you are the first and you have done such a beautiful job. Thank you again. ME
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5 posted 2001-03-25 09:32 PM


KoKo~
Lovely lady, this is just beautiful.
And I'm gonna swipe that melting sunset, so you can expect to see it again sometime in the future.

Now ... get your booty up to Open #13 and share some more of this lovely stuff with us !

Absolutely FANtastic !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mabel A. Dilley
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Seattle, WA, USA
6 posted 2001-03-26 03:06 AM


I sitting here decked out in gortex trying to convince myself of all the reasons I should not immediately book a flight. How does me sleeping on your deck sound to you? This had all the Koko imagination I've grown accustomed to. Peace out.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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7 posted 2001-03-27 09:19 AM


KoKo.....beautiful..just beautiful....love them all

((hugs))
Charisma

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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8 posted 2001-04-03 02:51 PM


KOKO,
  Beautiful image vignettes! Artistic vision here! YOU GO GIRL!
                  Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



Honeybee
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Ontario, CANADA
9 posted 2001-04-04 07:19 PM



Lovely as always  

Take care,
Melissa~

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