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Open Poetry #12

the Light

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-03-24 09:40 PM

At twilight, softness mingles,
With part dark, and still some light,

In moonlight, touching tingles,
Questions fade, quiet of night,

At sunrise, she finds an empty bed,
In harsh light, alone she cries.

Gloom

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

1 posted 2001-03-24 10:28 PM

Gloom,

I've just been enjoying re-reading (several times) the first line. I especially like its rhythm...and the way it seems to almost end right there.

Bob

Katherine Chandler
Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

2 posted 2001-03-25 01:54 PM

Very well written, sad but still.. a fine poem.

Kate

Blessings

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

3 posted 2001-03-26 03:59 AM

Short, sweet rhythm.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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