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Possum
Junior Member
since 2001-03-20
Posts 23


0 posted 2001-03-24 09:14 PM


The breeze blows soft and warm
Its cold in here
The beautiful trees mark the fall sky with their
colors
In here I see only black and white
The window panes streak with the cool bitter rain
The rain that will never feel my cheeks
The crash of the thunder
And the crack that lights up the night sky
Will never resound or rumble through this body
Quiet in my mind
Lonely in my soul
I walk around this space
A sad little troll


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RMW
Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

1 posted 2001-03-24 10:36 PM


Possum,

I enjoyed reading "...the window panes streak.." What is it about rain on the windows, the random drops that eventually become rivulets? I think you may have inspired me to tackle something along those lines. Thanks much.

Bob

thecraig
Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223

2 posted 2001-03-26 04:00 AM


Hard to change with the seasons
Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA
3 posted 2001-03-26 04:07 AM


Loss by any other name is loss just the same.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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