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Lunar Pleasures |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii 
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 purple shadows fall plumeria scented breeze lovers silhouettes lets go on a moonlight swim sultry starlit ambience © copyrights Koko Stewart Koomoa 2000 (all rights reserved) [This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 03-24-2001).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
KokoStewartKoomoa - your graphic is excellent, and your writing exquisite, I love it. BC |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A phenomenal tanka! Very creative with superb imagery and word phrasing! You chose great music and a perfect graphic to enhance it~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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jtclaydon New Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 3 |
beautful imagery.. looking for a star to wish upon, babe.. on a sultry perfume filled tropical evening.. LYB..H&K.. YBF Thunder. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
oh WOW...I know you have seen many a night like this....heavenly....just as these words are....  be well my friend...alwaysGreeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
You are truly gifted my friend. Loved the graphics, the music and those wonderful words.  KateBlessings Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KoKo~ This is just so very, very lovely. Softest hue of the night pleasures. LOVE IT ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Koko, I read the words and got lost in the mind-picture and music. I have been to a lovely place. Thank you for the trip. ME |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
I was dancing to the music and nearly forgot to read the words. Oh my, I do believe I need a tropical vacation for sure. May blessings flow. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh koko, what a beautiful real beautiful Tanka, love it very much, and the graphic is awesome. Charisma |
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Jellybean King Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 153Jelly, Bean |
I loved the beautiful island imagery and soft tones...gently rolling...rolling. Each line is a snapshot...forming a beautiful lover's portrait. Jellybean King |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
To all who comented: Thank you from the bottom of my heart. i do try to give the reader a special moment with the tanka or haiku I write. It is a joy to see that benefit and that it touched someone's day a little in a fast paced world. Poems are the way I endure life's challenges..thanks for all of you who give the gift of poetry to others. Passion,imagination |
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