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KokoStewartKoomoa
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0 posted 2001-03-24 04:16 PM





purple shadows fall
plumeria scented breeze
lovers silhouettes
lets go on a moonlight swim
sultry starlit ambience

© copyrights Koko Stewart Koomoa 2000 (all rights reserved)



[This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 03-24-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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1 posted 2001-03-24 04:27 PM


KokoStewartKoomoa - your graphic is excellent, and your writing exquisite, I love it.

BC

Honeybee
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2 posted 2001-03-24 06:28 PM



A phenomenal tanka! Very creative with superb imagery and word phrasing! You chose great music and a perfect graphic to enhance it~

Take care,
Melissa~

jtclaydon
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3 posted 2001-03-24 10:46 PM


beautful imagery.. looking for a star to wish upon, babe.. on a sultry perfume filled tropical evening.. LYB..H&K.. YBF Thunder.
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4 posted 2001-03-25 12:10 PM


oh WOW...I know you have seen many a night like this....heavenly....just as these words are.... be well my friend...always


Greeneyes~


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Without you I find myself
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Katherine Chandler
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5 posted 2001-03-25 12:58 PM


You are truly gifted my friend. Loved the graphics, the music and those wonderful words. Kate


Blessings

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2001-03-25 01:13 PM


KoKo~
This is just so very, very lovely.
Softest hue of the night pleasures.
LOVE IT !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mother_Earth
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7 posted 2001-03-25 09:10 PM


Koko, I read the words and got lost in the mind-picture and music. I have been to a lovely place. Thank you for the trip. ME
Mabel A. Dilley
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8 posted 2001-03-26 03:20 AM


I was dancing to the music and nearly forgot to read the words. Oh my, I do believe I need a tropical vacation for sure. May blessings flow.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Charisma
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9 posted 2001-03-26 07:52 AM


oh koko, what a beautiful real beautiful Tanka, love it very much, and the graphic is awesome.

Charisma


Jellybean King
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10 posted 2001-03-26 01:19 PM


I loved the beautiful island imagery and soft tones...gently rolling...rolling. Each line is a snapshot...forming a beautiful lover's portrait.

Jellybean King

KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
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Waikiki, Hawaii
11 posted 2001-03-26 01:30 PM


To all who comented: Thank you from the bottom of my heart. i do try to give the reader a special moment with the tanka or haiku I write. It is a joy to see that benefit and that it touched someone's day a little in a fast paced world. Poems are the way I endure life's challenges..thanks for all of you who give the gift of poetry to others.

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



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