Open Poetry #12 |
I Miss |
JFrizzua New Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 2 |
I miss your smell. I miss your skin. I miss your taste. I miss your smile. I miss your eyes. I miss your laugh. I miss your touch. I miss your hugs. I miss your body. I miss your heart. I miss your love. I miss our jokes. I miss our smiles. I miss our secrets. I miss our hard times. I miss when we were together. I miss when we were apart. I miss when we cried. I miss when we argued. I miss the way I was. I miss the way you were. I miss the way you said my name. I miss the way I love you sounded. I miss the way you made me crazy. I miss the way your body felt next to me. I miss the way your hand fit into mine. I miss the lies. I miss the pain. I miss the tears. I miss that day in the park. I miss that night on the boat. I miss that time you said yes. I miss the first time I met you. I miss the first time I said your name. I miss the first time I kissed you. I miss the first time I touched you. I miss the first time I said I love you. I miss missing you. I miss...well. I miss you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hello, and Welcome to Passions! I don't think you missed a sense OR emotion in this first poem! Make sure you hop over to Open Forum #13 to post your next one! Check your e-mail for a special Message! Karilea |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Seems to be a day for missing those we love. I know you have spoken for me. I like this a lot. Welcome! |
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JFrizzua New Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 2 |
thanks.. yea.. I'm going to spend a long time missing her.. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
We miss those we love when they are not with us; however don't allow the missing to dig a deep hole into a day. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
I could fall into this and cry a river. This tugs heartstrings. Welcome! "Often the test of courage is not to die but to live" |
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