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starryeyed999
Junior Member
since 2001-03-05
Posts 35


0 posted 2001-03-23 12:45 PM



You and Her are together,
Say your're gonna last forever
I don't think you're gonna make it
Oh no, I don't think you really mean it.
You have more feelings for me
We broke up, but that doesn't mean
we aren't meant to be.
We know the couple we made
Was never here to stay.
But maybe one day,
You'll leave her for me.

Someday it'll last,
One day we can try again
But today you're wasting your time with her.
Why oh why does it hurt so bad.
I wish I never had to let you go
I wonder what things would be
If you were here with me.
Maybe you'll get a clue,
She's not good for you!

<*Lacy*>
"I can only please one person a day. Today is not your day. Tomorrow doesn't look good either. I'll get back to you."

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RMW
Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

1 posted 2001-03-23 01:15 AM


Starryeyed,

When love convulses
Like the sea,
Expression bottled
Floats miserably.

(Expression is good for the heart. Thank you for sharing)

Bob

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2001-03-23 04:14 AM


I agree with Bob getting it out of your system to talk/write about it is a wonderful purge of the soul!
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