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Lady of the Sea |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii 
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 Sea nymph of Pacific pleasures Many a man has fallen for you Enticing them with hidden treasures Dressed in crystal azure blue Undulating waves in perfect motion She casts a glance and tides obey Mistress of the vast blue ocean Changing appearance each night and day When she smiles, the sea is fair Her sunlit waves kiss velvet sand Tradewinds blow her silken hair She beckons a lover to take her hand. Tho’ be forewarned of her fickle moods Changing as the skies turn gray Her oceanic attitudes A tempest tossed on stormy day Don’t ever turn your back on her She demands respect; don’t be a fool Seducing waves of blue allure May suddenly turn her tides on you She softly sings her ancient songs Calling her lover from upon the shore She knows his heart to her belongs; That he’ll return to her once more. Bewitching temptress, lady in blue Who can resist your mystical call? Men through the ages have fallen for you Never could one, resist you at all. Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko [This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 03-21-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
what a superb story!! I really liked this one Koko . . . wonderful. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
My library must have this gem! Thus far, this is my favourite poem of yours, it's so phenomenally penned! An excellent tale~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You, my Lady....are a poetess....and an enchantress as well... |
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jtclaydon New Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 3 |
Excellence in poetry, Babe... another beautiful creation.. addicting, compelling read.. tremendous write, with great presentation..Your talent is absolutely awesome.. fascinating imagery... Keep up the good work. LYB, H&K, YBF Thunder. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cher~ This is enchantingly lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
nicely written... enjoyed your poem very much. |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
This just happens to be one of my favorites as well, Cher. You are so creative in subject matter and in graphics. I admire you so much and I love the picture, but then I knew you were pretty cus I saw your loving heart first.. I love you girlfriend  ~Katie~ Blessings always Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely little story...I know I couldn't resist her...I'll be looking for her this weekend...James |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Beautifully done Cheri! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is very beautiful.... I enjoyed your words....Be well... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Koko, when the music started, I was hooked and the the beautiful words to paint such a lovely picture! I will look and read this often. Thank you for sharing with us. Hugs, ME |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Sven: This is a real compliment from you my friend! Melissa: I am so delighted that you liked this poem too and consider it worthy of keeping. Hugs! Thank you. Sunshine: and you are a ray of sunshine just like your name. Thanks I needed the re-inforcemnet of the encouragement. I have been very ill and the write has been a real struggle for me so this one was special to me to be able to write it. hugs to you! John, Hugs my BF! Thanks for all you do and all your love. Marge: I am so pleased that you consider my poems and comment. You are one dear lady and so very talented your self. Mike thanks so much and aloha! Kathrine: You really give my spirit a lift with your words and your friendship. I love you lady! James: aloha! I pray you do find this lady of your dreams. praying for ya to. Mysteria: You are also just wonderful and my beloved friend. Your love and encouragement keep me going. I love you! Green eyes: Thanks for taking the time to comment and I adore your well wishing style. I need it desparately. You are a ray of sunshine and may all you bless come back to you. Mother earth: The music knocks me dead!LOL I love this song and listen to my poem page just to listen to it. hehehe Thanks for your lovely comment! Passion,imagination |
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