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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-03-23 12:33 PM


Such sweet dreams come to visit me at night
As my head on the pillow seems oh, so light
My mind is full of so many good things
Like friendship and love
And birds in my garden that sing

So peaceful am I as my dreams come to me
But tonight who will know where they will take me?
To the beautiful blue sea?
Where the gulls they roam free
To my garden of paradise?
Such a wonderful place to be
Or will I be in your arms?
Close to heaven I am there
As you look into my eyes
And seduce me with your stare

Such a place do I only find in dreams
But, oh so close do you really seem
As your hand touches my face
Around my lips you do trace
I have fallen into a trance
As we move together in love's dance

Such a dream feels so right
But only lasts through the night
Until the dawn breaks free
And you're no longer with me
My dreams have come to an end
After all the love you did send
Now my day starts with a smile
As I think of you all the while

Suetang

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RMW
Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

1 posted 2001-03-23 01:19 AM


Suetang,

How does that go, "..a dream is a wish your heart makes..."

I think your poem says it much better. Hold the thought.

Bob

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2001-03-23 04:11 AM


Such a place do I only find in dreams
But, oh so close do you really seem
As your hand touches my face
Around my lips you do trace
I have fallen into a trance
As we move together in love's dance

They can be so very real.....sometimes I hate it when I awake...especially if it's a dream like this one! Good writing!

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