Open Poetry #12 |
Winds of March |
Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
The wind has seized me with a shout, turned my umbrella inside out, torn the hat from off my hair. Carried it away somewhere. It's sent me stumbling down the street and splashed cold water on my feet. Whipped my clothes to left and right. Made of me a sloppy sight. I just can't take it anymore and so I duck into a store. Call a taxi. Who can stand when winds of march assault the land? Betty Lou Hebert Previously published by Moosebound Press [This message has been edited by Trillium (edited 03-22-2001).] |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Trillium, This is really quite vivid. Simple, yet "splashed" with description. Thanks for sharing the experience. Bob |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You vividly describe the March winds. I have been wanting to get out into the garden, the sun is shining but the wind is icy. Soon! Joyce |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Ah, you are not far from the NW. I thought you walking beside me. March so welcome, yet unpredictable. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Looks like March is coming in like a lion! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
RMW: Thanks for your comments. This really happened to me in Seattle a few years back. It ruined my umbrella and almost ruined me too! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Thanks Joyce! I wrote this about an experience I had one day in Seattle awhile back. In March and a howling wind! The wind is icy here too and I have not started doing anything in the yard. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Julian: Thanks for commenting. I do live in North Idaho, but the locale of the poem was Seattle. I guess from your comment, you are familiar with the area? Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Elizabeth: Thanks for commenting. Betty Lou Hebert |
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