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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-02-21 08:18 AM


Of Gleam and Dream

Chaos stands like a forest green
Shadows and dangers parts unseen
To journey through this unknown land
You’d have to mark each tree a band.

The paths are few and far between
And some that have never been seen.
You always chance a happenstance
Your arms should carry shield and lance.

And dragons live in chaos woods
And caused many a widowhood.
They charge you with a firry eye
And bed you to a cinders lie.

But beyond the fight lies a grail
With truth the key to chaos jail
That key unlocks your Eden’s goal
Opening the door of your soul.

Just beyond this chaos gleam
Lies the goal of human dream.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-02-21 08:41 AM


...tilt at the windmill...follow the rainbows...believe in your dreams...always...

Smiling...

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-02-21 08:58 AM


And dragons live in chaos woods
And caused many a widowhood.
They charge you with a firry eye
And bed you to a cinders lie.

But beyond the fight lies a grail
With truth the key to chaos jail
That key unlocks your Eden’s goal
Opening the door of your soul.

Just beyond this chaos gleam
Lies the goal of human dream.
=================
oh that Randy ... is he snorting and bellowing again?
hes just showing off...
probably has heartburn from the chips and beer
give him some raspberry tea ... that will calm the chaos


"To journey through this unknown land
You’d have to mark each tree a band."

very cool write Sy-babes
love the gleam in your eye and the rhyme on time.
*winkiewinkie*
me



Love is my religion, I believe in nothing else.
To find that inspiration, live that inner vision.
Love is my religion...I believe in you.
~T Kimmel

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-02-21 11:03 AM


Sunshine,
Thank you dear for the read and comment. *L*

JM,
That Randy, since he saddled himself up I can't do a thing with him. Winkiewinkie Stinky

ethome
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4 posted 2001-03-23 03:34 AM


I had to resurrect this one Seymour because of your response to my 'In The Chorus'
I enjoed!

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-03-23 07:46 AM


Ethome,
I thank you for the extra breath.

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6 posted 2001-03-23 11:28 AM


Oh, Seymour~
I'm *hugging* YOU for this adorable piece.
And - ETHome for flipping it to the top so I could enjoy it !

'To journey through this unknown land
You’d have to mark each tree a band.'


Just too cool, poet man !
~*Marge*~


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Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2001-03-23 01:54 PM


Marge,
And I love you too.

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