Open Poetry #12 |
Portrait of a Hero - For the special Men of Passions |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
He seems to understand her heart as words of comfort flow from pen Listens as she so sad imparts and makes himself known as a friend. He takes her pain onto himself and in so doing lessens it He shores her up, she needs his help he cares naught of her lack of wit. Each time she cries for help, he's there though he has sadness of his own He shows through words, a heart that cares and never lets her feel alone. To this good man, she sends a smile though frequently instead, it's tears His kindness has seen her through trials and gives her hope that peace is near. To every man here at Passions who has given me hope that there are truly feeling, caring, and intelligent men left in the world. Thank you [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 01-16-2001).] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Applause! I second that Sandra ... they are a wonderful group of gentle men, and it's so nice to know that there are indeed caring and tender hearts still dwelling in this world. Wonderful tribute to our men of Passions! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Motion passed...this is wonderful...isn't it great to take a special moment to thank those men at Passions who truly know the way to our hearts and minds...and them that leave us intact... Well done Cat! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Very well done, C and thanks for thinking about us! Nathan |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
With Ron as the leader of this band, there can be no doubt that there are men here that deserve this wonderful tribute. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Here at Passions I have seen many a Knight in shining armour, and many a Prince Charming waiting there to console a fair maiden. I agree with everyone above me....the men who reside here are strong, yet caring, and share their loves and hearts. What more could you want in a best friend? Wonderful tribute to our men of Passions!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you Sandra. . . but for every special man here at Passions. . . there are far more special women. . . Thank you all ladies. . . we would be lost without you. . . Wonderful poem my friend. . . just wonderful. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
CAT, a sweet write hun and I applaud you for this... These men who reside in this PPhome are indeed rare jewels affording us with some tranquility of mind, comfort of heart and a friendship oneOfAkind... *~coco~* |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Yes, evey man here is a true treasure......gotta love 'em! This is wonderful! -SEA |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
This was very good. Its nice to see the sentiments shared here. It's a two way street though, you know. I think the men would agree with me on that. |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Catalina, Touche'! A wonderful tribute to all the wonderful and rare men that write in Passions, whose hearts have touched so many. You have touched many hearts, yourself... Love, Elise |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I agree totally with this beautiful poem, and echo "thank you" |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sandra, this was wonderful of you to do and you did it with such feeling that no-one can doubt your sincerity. We all go through rough times and lonely times and it is always nice to have friends to turn to. As one of the men here at Passions that have come to appreciate all you wonderful ladies, I thank you much for this wonderful tribute to all the men here. |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
From one Cat to another, this was just wonderful. The men of Passions are some of the greatest men around. You also fufilled a challenge that I had from a while back. "Each time she cries for help, he's there though he has sadness of his own He shows through words, a heart that cares and never lets her feel alone." Those are my favorite lines. That is how I made it though many of my bad times. Take care Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Sandra, and a beautiful tribute to all those caring souls! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sandra, wonderful write, and well deserved! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, would I be considered a man or a boy? (giggles) Know that you are loved by many and there are still men who can truly feel in the world, sweet friend, we all love you so much! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-30-2002 06:05 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this should be reposted! we have so many more now! |
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