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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2001-02-03 09:21 PM




“WHO YOU ARE””


by
Bill Charles
~~~~

I touched your glowing face,
feeling your soft
tenderness…

I gazed into your blue eyes,
sensing your gracious
essence…

I kissed your moist lips,
leaving me totally
breathless…

I fell in love with
an angel,
desirable
in all of her
elegance…
~~~~



© Copyright 2001 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Ariana
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1 posted 2001-02-03 09:32 PM


Bill

You certainly know how to make one's heart flutter.  WOW!

              Ariana

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2001-02-03 09:38 PM


Elegant in its simplicity Bill..very nice  Hugs
~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Nan
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3 posted 2001-02-03 09:47 PM


These few words say it all, Bill... This is absolutely lovely... Keep those romantic words coming, my friend..
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4 posted 2001-02-04 12:34 PM


Bill~
Very, very pretty thoughts.
~*Marge*~


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Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2001-02-04 01:26 PM


Bill,

My you have it bad my friend!!  Very beautiful writing.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2001-02-04 03:25 PM



Ariana

nakdthoughts

Nan

Marge Tindal

Lone Wolf,

I do apologized to everyone that I can't reply just now as I would like to each individual. But I would like to say to everyone, thank you so much for stopping by to read this writing. It is special to me, and I do appreciate it very much.

Thanks everyone,

BC

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7 posted 2001-02-04 05:57 PM


Bill,  

   ~sigh~  How do you do it everytime?  Make my heart just melt with your romantic ways and beautiful words. Just wonderful.

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2001-02-05 07:44 AM


rosepetals25 - at times even I wonder where the words come from.  But I am very grateful that they are within, and that I can go and get them and then write them down for others to see.  Thanks you for reading this.

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9 posted 2002-03-30 06:09 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is so sweet of you to write this to her, sweet friend, may she always be the angel of your life and guide you with loves light! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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10 posted 2003-01-27 11:25 AM


you just never stop, do you?
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