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each and every time..... (no more haleyja)
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each and every time..... (no more haleyja) |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
each and every time are you just a dream that enters my mind a sweetness so sublime when i'm rushing to and fro you sit in the background of the very front row my lips have spoken for you when you could not and listened as you talked in the darkness when I dream are you there love... are you there beneath the rain your a shadow in my thoughts i've touched you, though i have not and my finger tips have loved you each and every time James Parker Haley Feb 29, 2000 |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
James, I like the juxtaposition of "background" and "front row". RMW |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my lips have spoken for you when you could not and listened as you talked in the darkness when I dream are you there love... are you there beneath the rain your a shadow in my thoughts i've touched you, though i have not and my finger tips have loved you each and every time ============================== now tell me how a moth is supposed to resist this  "i've touched you, though i have not and my finger tips have loved you each and every time" that is such a poetically lovely line p-man... sensual laced with longing...very nice. and posted under any name ... thy poetry is still thy flame very cool poem Parker-babes..and a personal fave. oh you speak to me in riddles |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"in the darkness when I dream are you there love... are you there beneath the rain your a shadow in my thoughts i've touched you, though i have not and my finger tips have loved you each and every time" What marvels the mind can reveal about our inner being...that self within our self...that person that we don't know but think we know.... that anticipation of how we'd like things to be.......... that truth that consumes our desires..... those wonderful make sense while you're having them dreams ...time after time.........great write!! You're very good! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I'm with JMW (hope I remembered that right)...and I liked this so much. Touched or not. Great! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know, your "other" name always brought a promise of "Parker".... and now....I don't have to wonder at your brilliance... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Good to see you again, old what's-your-name |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is just splendiferous Parker...beautiful just wasnt a big enough word for the wonder of this |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
RMW, well thanky...  Janet, thanks, I can do wonders with my fingertips  great back massage.. or type without looking. ethome, thanks, that was very deep. JLR, well thanks. Sunshine, are you married.  Balladeer, thank you, memory still going I see.... its Parker... Parrrrrrker. Paula, your too nice, thank you sweety. Parker |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"in the darkness when I dream are you there love... are you there beneath the rain your a shadow in my thoughts i've touched you, though i have not and my finger tips have loved you each and every time" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ By any name, you are still.....Hey handsome This is SO romantic....my goodness, this set my heart all a fluttering Beautiful Parker SEA |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I always knew you were Parker, even when you were someone else...wonderful poem! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ROFL ... hey P-babes.... Back massage???? OH .. Is that what you "foreigners" call it hahahawe got another name for it here under the Arch tee hee....yer so cute when yer being a tease later-magic fingers gator |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sea, thank you very much sweety. Martie, thanks I guess I am. Janet, well thats what we callit but maybe not how to spell it. Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
........how did i miss this one... i like it..very much.. and i must say..i identify with it..too much... very nicely written, love.. hugs, g time makes us bolder..even children get older..and i'm gettin' older too... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
dg, and I had thought that your eye's had examined every word of me... I guess there's still a few words you need to see. Parker |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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