Open Poetry #12 |
Everything Has An End |
Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Everything Has An End. In years to come you will be witnessing The fall of structures many years standing People will see the fall of great monuments And find that nothing is ever permanent Inch by inch the Eiffel Tower will fall So too will the flow of great waterfalls To be replaced by other architectural triumphs Or carefully planned rivers of concrete bases The hills will come down in piles of rubbles And inventions of super unnatural jungles Will form part of the lives of generations Where once roamed wild fauna and flora Implosions will be the name of the game As mighty buildings become unsightly Rather than letting nature follow its path Autonomes will control and destroy To watch in awe of beautiful inventions Effective in making lives better for millions Will only turn to sunless covered structures Where oxigen is manufactured at a cost for cures Many centuries to come will alter thinking Morality will be seen as a curse blinding Destroying the innerself, rendering people To nothing more than statistics with a use by date Oh how wonderful states have performed Transforming nations with the might of power Telling us that this world will be a better place If the last century is any indication of pace Then really time has come to destroy the structure Of state power over people and nature Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) [This message has been edited by Daniel J D (edited 01-11-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DJD~ very expressive.............very cool -SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, and all for a new heaven and a new earth and a world without end...this is very inspiring.< !signature--> "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 01-11-2001).] |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
SEA, Thank you, you may have noticed a bit of anger in this. Holding back is never good. Irish Rose, Thank you, I agree. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yeah I can hear you....hope that it will never going that way....and hope that people and nature will walk in harmony. great expression. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Really enjoyed this piece. The most beautiful man made gardens can't begin to compare to nature's awesome balanced beauty. Thank you for sharing this. Rae |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Charisma, and Sandgrain, Thank you both, there is a reality in how we handle this wonderful earth, it has to be done gently. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Daniel--A strongly expressed message in this read. We must learn not to smother the naturalworld while enhancing our own humanworld (which is not totally natural..) you convey a sharp to truth in that a change of pace is needed...excellent writing. take care, Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Vandana, Thank you, a little wake up call never hurts. Poeminister, Fully accept your views, and appreciate your concerns. Cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
history repeats itself...yes |
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