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She Roams
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She Roams |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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She Roams feel the pull, feel the real of spray’s foam and seagull’s peal she roams to find salt float at her feet but laughter is not found at sea spring winds and changing tides have taken the shy that she hides and in the spray and crash of wave lies the melody of her love, saved saved for this day, beneath the sun saved and cherished, as he is the one to whom she gave her heart, with care ‘neath the midnight sky, with stars so rare crashing, crashing, pounding salt to wound he’d left, she’d cried, much too soon but the spray’s foam calls her real and she longs for the seagull’s peal and now she roams the midnight beach as cross the heavens her love shall reach |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Sunshine, this was beautiful.  "When people show you who they are, believe them" |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
very nice, you could almost smell the ocean, very vivid imaging |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
A lovely tug felt here. I can even smell the salt in the air. Vivid. Mike |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I have sand between my toe! Lovely. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i love this.... and you...... |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A good poem abut a lonely love. Joyce |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"spring winds and changing tides have taken the shy that she hides and in the spray and crash of wave lies the melody of her love, saved" "crashing, crashing, pounding salt to wound he’d left, she’d cried, much too soon but the spray’s foam calls her real and she longs for the seagull’s peal and now she roams the midnight beach as cross the heavens her love shall reach" Very very poetic and enjoyable......another fine work by such a ray of sunshine.... take care dear poet lady! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
As an imveterate beachcomber - these images - these feelings - I am intimately aware of = you've touched me deeply with this Thank You |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Let her roam, soon she'll find her love. I loved this! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Sunshine, "...salt float at her feet.." Marvelous sound. Bob |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
my friends...landlocked, I can only remember the feel, and apparently, from your words, I remember the feel quite well.... thank you all for sharing your thoughts....it means more to me than you shall ever know.... |
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