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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Sleepless flowered paper two dimensional appears to move three dimensional as lace shadows from night beams of moon's light stream in fullest of moon lights my dreams so feel the pull that is scattering sleep along the prairie and walk with me in the wind come help me gather my thoughts as they run as rampant as children on a spring day then just lay quiet with me here on the plains here in my spirit and let me feel you telling me it will be all right in all ways always then then let the sound of me touch the moon |
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FrankBH Junior Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 10Florida |
WOW !! BEAUTIFUL. Thanks for sharing |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
flowered paper two dimensional appears to move three dimensional as lace shadows from night beams of moon's light stream in fullest of moon lights my dreams so feel the pull that is scattering sleep along the prairie and walk with me in the wind =================== then let the sound of me touch the moon ============ trust me my gifted poet of the sun ... you just did ... (touch the moon) and also me with this gift of grace from your pen. very cool poem ... that moon moon lastnight needs to be named the poets moon .. its got us all held in its glow. Some find subtlety in strangers some find subtlety alone Your eyes,you see everything my eyes,I see its all together now and I know. ~candlebox~ |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Love any poem about the moon, but loved this esspecally. Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ You've just been awarded a WOW ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A lack of sleep seems well worth it when it produces something as lovely as this! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the moon will always hear the secrets of the sleepless. . .  wonderful my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
...............wow............. |
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
This was so beautiful...I loved it! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
As I tried to think of an adequate reply I came on Marge's - - I don't think I can top that - so I'll simply echo it - if it were in my power you'd be heard beyond the moon |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
The whispers of sleepless sunshine, reflecting off the moon ... I'll listen for you, on a sleepless night Very lovely Karilea |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*WOW* Sunshine.....what a wonderful gem you wrote here...love it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This creates a haunting scene in my mind. Really lovely! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari dear heart, This is utterly superb, absolutely first class writing I love this dear heart, I haven't the time to sit here at your feet and sip at the quiet grace of you so, I'm taking this with me, for later. Love and warm stuff Puck  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is beautiful. Almost makes me feel happy. Sandra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My gracious....you poets bring tears... these comments are wonderful, thank you all.... |
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