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No Regrets
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No Regrets |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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This evening, my mind raced straight to you, wanting to free itself from it's verbal punishment playing within. You weren't there, where you could have been found. Time failed me, I was too late. I am always too late, behind the times, my battery always run down. It's the static within, causes my watch to stop. I am allergic to myself, so they say, causing me to eat away at myself until one day, I shall be no more. Until then, I shall hold onto thoughts of you, trying day after day, to get my timing right, so that one day, when I need you, I will find you smiling, waiting in anticipation, both of us having no regrets. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ohhhhhhhh, I like this SO much..........very well done!  SEA |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh yes, timing is everything it seems. I am always running late, missing that one opportunity that could maybe have made things work. You know, here's a thought, maybe it's them! They are off time, not us! What do you think? Anyway, this was special. Be happy (even a little) Luv S |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Very, very cool. I'm allergic to myself, too. I really like this. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Wow, for some reason, you're writing reminds me of myself and some of my experience. Nice. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
SEA happy you liked it thank you Sandra I have missed seeing you, I hope all is well...yes I believe it is their timing that is off..not ours  or at least we can believe that if we choose to JLR allergic to yourself too? well I really am...my body produces too many white blood cells sometimes..thinking I have a virus...well maybe I am the virus who knows...thank you PoeticKnight Well someday you will have to tell me of some of your experiences...then we can compare lives.. thanks~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Great stuff. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Tony..I appreciate your kindness Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
this was great took me to thoughts of my own life, and someone who I am never on the same page with, and how I would love for us to find that place with no regrets... excellent. "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
smile |
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