Open Poetry #12 |
Symphony of Rain |
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Symphony of Rain Symphony of rain song composite by nature drumming heavens plea Symphony of rain playing her natural song beat of life within Symphony of rain wet blessing gift of heaven waterfall of love Symphony of rain heavenly arrangement by wet rainy day's Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a wonderful way to do this Charisma! All are very very well done....great work! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Rain really does sing to us doesn't it?!! I loved this! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Charisma- each of these could have been posted alone and earned praise - together they are magnificent |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful collection of verse here Charisma SEA will love these when she finds them very well done imagery take care dear poet jm When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ethome: thank you for you lovely response. Irish Rose: yes rain does sing if you want to hear it. Wilfred: thank you for your compliment...I am so glad that you like it. JM: I am so glad that you like it, and maybe you are right that SEA would love them...remembering how she love rain. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
oh yeah my friend. This cowboy loves the rain and you are so right when you say it sings out to us. I have never found one of it's songs that I didn't like. Well done my friend. This whole piece was beautiful from beginning to end. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Well, Janet was right, I love these..... Charisma, these are so beautiful.......rain hasn't visited me enough this year......and this helps -SEA |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Charisma, This is very powerful. Let the rain come, let it bring with it life. Superb. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. . . wonderfully refreshing my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A beautiful symphony of haikus... Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely Charisma..as always..HUGS ~~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Mark: thank you my dear cowboy, glad that you love the singing rain too. with always another beat in her. Sea: I truly hope that these one will help...so glad that you loved it. Daniel: thank you for the superb my friend.. Sven: refreshing as only rain can be Melissa: thank you for your kind reply Victoria: thank you for the lovely comment |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too love the rain so much and always see it as a gift from heaven, filling all of the world with life! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write! |
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