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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-01-17 05:00 AM




Symphony of Rain


Symphony of rain
song composite by nature
drumming heavens plea

Symphony of rain
playing her natural song
beat of life within

  Symphony of rain
wet blessing gift of heaven
waterfall of love

  Symphony of rain
heavenly arrangement
by wet rainy day's


Charisma


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ethome
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1 posted 2001-01-17 05:02 AM


What a wonderful way to do this Charisma! All are very very well done....great work!
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2 posted 2001-01-17 05:25 AM


Rain really does sing to us doesn't it?!!  
I loved this!




Wilfred Yeats
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3 posted 2001-01-17 05:44 AM


Charisma- each of these could have been posted alone and earned praise - together they are magnificent
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4 posted 2001-01-17 09:28 AM


beautiful collection of verse here Charisma
SEA will love these when she finds them
very well done imagery
take care dear poet
jm

When to the sessions of sweet silent thought,
I summon up remembrance of things past ...
I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought.
~Shakespeare~

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5 posted 2001-01-17 09:51 AM


ethome: thank you for you lovely response.  

Irish Rose: yes rain does sing if you want to hear it.

Wilfred: thank you for your compliment...I am so glad that you like it.

JM: I am so glad that you like it, and maybe you are right that SEA would love them...remembering how she love rain.

Mark Bohannan
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6 posted 2001-01-17 09:54 AM


oh yeah my friend.  This cowboy loves the rain and you are so right when you say it sings out to us.  I have never found one of it's songs that I didn't like.  Well done my friend.  This whole piece was beautiful from beginning to end.
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Well, Janet was right, I love these..... Charisma, these are so beautiful.......rain hasn't visited me enough this year......and this helps   -SEA
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8 posted 2001-01-17 07:11 PM


Charisma,
This is very powerful. Let the rain come, let it bring with it life. Superb.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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9 posted 2001-01-17 07:13 PM


ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. . .

wonderfully refreshing my friend. . .  

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10 posted 2001-01-17 07:34 PM



A beautiful symphony of haikus...

Take care,
Melissa


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11 posted 2001-01-17 08:22 PM


lovely Charisma..as always..HUGS

              ~~V~


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12 posted 2001-01-18 03:34 PM


Mark: thank you my dear cowboy, glad that you love the singing rain too. with always another beat in her.

Sea: I truly hope that these one will help...so glad that you loved it.

Daniel: thank you for the superb my friend..

Sven: refreshing as only rain can be  

Melissa: thank you for your kind reply

Victoria: thank you for the lovely comment




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13 posted 2002-03-28 06:29 PM




(smiles) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too love the rain so much and always see it as a gift from heaven, filling all of the world with life! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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awesome write!
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