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Reminising Sighs.............
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Reminising Sighs............. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I tried not to think of you this morning over my coffee cup It was just too damn early for reminiscing sighs so I fought you back to a corner of my heart A place where I thought you wouldn't get out without my knowing or wanting Silly me always thinking I can control my emotions Trying to fool myself into believing I can go a day without a thought of you finding it's way out of my heart out of my soul I guess I was just hoping Maybe tomorrow………………… ~SEA~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Powerfully stunning! Well done, SEA!!!**** |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
SEA, I know this feeling muchly...trying to push the thoughts away and the more you push they stay....well expressed. take care Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-19-2001).] |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
SEA Yes, there is always hope for tomorrow... Bob <>< |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
VAS~  thank you!!PM~ always, I thank you from my heart Bob~ there is always hope.............thank you ~SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
without a thought of you finding it's way out of my heart out of my soul ====================== some things never leave us ... some things never should ... and do we really want them too??? not really  very cool write Sea-girlie.... well inspired ... As sure as God made wine you can't wrap your arms around a memory In the dark for me youre the candle flame that flickers to life ~Mission UK~ |
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Dear Heart Junior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 23Dreamland, fifth cloud on the right |
Lovely poem just wonderful. The thoughts seem to come all by themselves no mater how we push them away Really like this Reach out and touch someone Holland Dozier and Holland |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
when you're in control again - you'll know it - It takes time ~S~ [[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[hugs]]]]]]]]]]]]]] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well hello Scarlett? That darn ol Rhett bothering you again? Well done SEA! |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Sea, absolutely FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh, yes, that morning coffee and emotions--SEA this is so honest and real..... I can sure relate to this. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'I tried not to think of you this morning over my coffee cup It was just too damn early for reminiscing sighs' Ahh...do I know this, SEA! Wonderful write! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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Jill Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 62Louisiana |
SEA - FANTASTIC - I know these feelings as past memories are with me everyday...and as Janet so well stated...Would we really want to forget them anyway???? I think not. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Silly me thinking I can control my emotions." Sometimes I think I almost am succeeding...and then..James |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Couldn't help but add that this is very well done... strength in the tight wording and the emotions. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know just how you feel; the morning is always such a lovely time to daydream away and sip away and our thoughts seem to stay with us! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great! I loved this! |
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