Open Poetry #12 |
Along a Country Road |
Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
An aged wooden fence appears and retreats in the mist. A moody silence broken only by the photographer's footsteps upon dirt remains of a country lane. Ethereal beauty lingers in place an intricate texture of an impressionists painting. We borrow a bit of the moon's final glimmer to break out from the whirlwind of fall's most vibrant harvest: tiny pencil cattails fan out across this multi-colored field lavished with the richest red huckleberry leaves set off by linum, preserved lemon leaves and lepidium. Your boots suck bottom mud to behold a world of wonder caught in a single maple leaf, its veins as intricate as a map. The jagged peaked perimeter so fascinating you can not resist tracing it with fingertips that are nearly frozen. This morning love stories seem written just for you, and you wonder when does serenity become all energy, and why does your heart dance with every turn of your head? Richer yet, the scent of towering pines becomes part of your memory, this sweet timber destined to row in circles around your heart. Lured with the promise of hot coffee and a warm car, you head for home. This day God assumed the form of a cattail a towering tree, a lingering scent upon the chilled wind. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed the country road Julian...James |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wow this reminded me of the Bridges of Madison County...and I could almost smell the trees, now if that "ain't" good penning, then I will eat my pencil! Good jobber! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I thought this was lovely Julian and I have to know if that picture is the Roseman Bridge from the movie The Bridges Of Madison County?? Regards, Sue Suetang |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'This morning love stories seem written just for you, and you wonder when does serenity become all energy, and why does your heart dance with every turn of your head? Richer yet, the scent of towering pines becomes part of your memory, this sweet timber destined to row in circles around your heart.' Breathtaking images here, Julian! I truly loved this! sp to be with you... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ummm, yes, what Mysteria and Suetang said, but a little more....your use of words, the sensation and sensual feel of them...transported me to an immediate vacation from my work... so therefore, I must say...WELL DONE, and Welcome to Passions, for I do believe this is one of the first of your posts I have read! And do I thank you for that! |
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