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redwriter1
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0 posted 2001-03-15 09:58 PM



Everything I've ever had
or had the pleasure of knowing
has hurt beyond compare and words
when love is involved.. I know this

The joy of birth and the pain I felt
The warmth of love and the burn it left
The heighth of passion, the painful desire
and the smile you gave me, that sent me higher

There is no joy as sweet
as knowing you're willing to endure the pain
in order to know this



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Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-03-16 07:45 AM


Well, I don't know why this one is still not replied to, it's fabulous, it's extremely deep in thought and yes, everything we ever had..oh yes, I can feel this as I read it. Few are brave enough or have enough staying power to see a woman through, but God knows they exist.....
Thank you for a great post

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee



[This message has been edited by Kathleen (edited 03-16-2001).]

Just A Woman
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since 2001-03-10
Posts 507

2 posted 2001-03-16 07:48 AM


thanks for bumping it, Kathleen! I'd have hated to miss it.
So very true........It is worth the pain.


After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all.

redwriter1
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 480
Franklin, TN
3 posted 2001-03-16 04:58 PM


Thank you kathleen.. and p.s. i love your signature line
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

4 posted 2001-03-20 08:57 AM


Somehow the wonder of feeling it again makes the memory of the pain of no consequence. Loved your thoughts on this, red!
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2001-03-20 08:39 PM


redwriter1 - many fine words of inside thoughts. I enjoyed this very much, as it made a lot of sense to me. Thanks for writing it.

BC

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