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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
The First Time She encountered different gents On the carousel of merriment Some offering precious treasures Others bouquets of kind gesture Still she found herself at loss And for the first time she yearned love... In the memories once known as gold Empty shadows dominate thoughts of alone Until she met him then her life took a twirl And for the first time she acquainted love... His song of heart was like melody of child When gazing at joviality of carnival clowns His lips a whisper of passionate bliss Capturing her essence in magical kiss And for the first time she enraptured love... His likeness was the season autumn With hair in hues of brown and gold His words spoken like breeze refreshing Unfolding dreams of infinite pleasure And at the rise of each morning dawn She would awaken reminiscing love *~coco~*  [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 01-17-2001).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Coco ~~~ < !signature-->This is truly beautiful and I am touched by not only the poem, but the graphic as well!! But then, you knew I would be, didn't you?!!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 01-16-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dani~ Positively breathtaking ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SUNNY1... I am elated you appreciated this post and you know I'm smiling just knowing you got enjoyment from reading this... MARGE, my sweetest thanks 2u for your treasured words I always hold dear... Hugs2U2 *~coco~* |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Coco~ An absolute devine write honey bun  well done, I love it~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Coco ... you've captured the romance in all it's splendor, very nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Coco~ this is perfectly gorgeous and headed directly to my library! Wow....just love this! -SEA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Very beautiful Coco... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Wow! Stunning. Reads like the beginning of a great novel. The graphic is beautiful too. Deb |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Coco, Sweet is sweet and Honey is honey but this Is right on the money. Enjoyed, Sy |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
PoetFriend Coco, this is indeed another beautiful poem from your pen. . . wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Tracie, Thank you my friend for your sweetness in reply KIT, I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this poem it's always a treat to have you stop by and learn you enjoyed the poem SEA, Your reply is adorable sweetie and I thank you once again for stopping by VANDANA, Thank you so much for the kind response and I appreciate you taking the time to reply PAULA, Hugs2uSweetie and thank you for your kindness and sharing of your heart BLOOM, It's a different format of write for me and I'm especially glad you found it an enjoyable read SEYMOUR, You're too kind PoetFriend and I smile at your charming reply SVEN, MyFriend ya know there's so much to be thankful for and to know that you enjoyed this poem inspires me so much more |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Beautifully written..and i adore the painting coco..HUGS ~V~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 01-16-2001).] |
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