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All In Favor
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All In Favor |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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All in Favor All in favor say “I” Say “I’m the butt-sniffer” Say “I’m not a what-iffer If all I do is follow Then I may be hard to swallow But damned if I’m in favor And that’s what really matters My frailty will not shatter And my empty head won’t splatter When it’s filled with lullabyes In my mind I know are lies But my mind is empty too Cuz I fill it up with you You’re my lie... my lie... No one elses lie but mine And I’m willing to be thine Rock me gently passionate lover And my heart will thus resign Is it truly a bad connection When I'm spinned in wrong direction Every time your gone away You say it’s a lag delay But I think your harem calls Lotta kills on trophy walls I have come to the conclusion And I’ve made my final wish Throw me back into the salty sea I’m to small to be your fish [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 01-15-2001).] |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Oh my , this is so, so good... But I think your harem calls Lotta kills on trophy walls I have come to the conclusion And I’ve made my final wish Throw me back into the salty sea I’m to small to be your fish Loved this one!!! ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
pretty cool! i like the rhyming and it flows off the tongue rather easily. check your mail |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Walt~ even though I have no idea what you mean here, it does flow rather nice  -SEA |
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