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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-03-19 03:13 AM

bound only by the limitations
of short-roped imagination
dancing on the water--sink
heavy in my disbelief
with final swallowing of air
I sink into sea of despair
and fishes gather--think me food--
blowing kisses of the truth
descending, I, amidst seaweed
necessity confronting need--
need, I NEED, some air to breathe!
as bubbles rise up, yearning blue...

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2001-03-19 03:26 AM

O Serene one,

This is wonderfully expressed...

"I, amidst seaweed
necessity confronting need-"

WOW!

regards,
sudhir

[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 03-19-2001).]

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

2 posted 2001-03-19 02:52 PM

you write like no other sweet lady...you write for me too...yearing blue...incredible way of saying it

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

3 posted 2001-03-19 03:00 PM

blowing kisses of truth,

I love this line..

A

a day keeps the world

"G.
Bernie

Bernie Slicker

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

4 posted 2001-03-19 04:03 PM

bound only by the limitations
of short-roped imagination

gosh...how do you do it?
you never cease to amaze me and always leave me wanting more.

expressed beautifully.

You gotta love livin, cause dyin's a pain in the ass.

"It don't mean a thing
if it ain't got that swing."

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

5 posted 2001-03-19 04:40 PM

something's fishy going on around here.... so now you're a mermaid, are ya? hmmmm.... well, harpo, i'm right there with you....trying to tread water to stay alive... and i can't breathe either but i never figured out i was drowning.... lol... i have a solution... let's grow fins!

but while we're down here, i heard there are many fishes in the sea... y'think? nah... never mind...maybe so, but i'm still all wrapped up in the peel-n-eat jumbos.... hehe... never mind... inside joke

but oh... i've gone off on a tangent haven't i? geez, girl, i'm sowwy!!!

about the poem.... yeah, the poem... well,

it's kewl!

makes me breathe a little easier... in out in out in out... no WAIT~ that's not breathing... that's panting!!! hehe.... off i go panting... see how easy it is to get my pants out?....speaking of which, where's my mardi gras package? mailman stops by each day with nothin' but bills!!! oh, but i got a free pass to the gym and so, i think i'm going back... that's right, you heard it right... doreen in training.... now THAT oughta make the breathing more steady, y'think? ok, i'll shutup now....

but the poem? i dig it, girl... it jams! take a deep breath.... and by the time you let it out, i'll be finished with this ramble...

see? toldja! *wink*

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