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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-03-18 03:26 PM


Two Visitors

they met
in one time
in one place
not looking
just searching
for the where
feeling the pull
pulling them
together
not searching
just looking
for the why

once met
a sharing
found caring
in the full
in the feel
of the symbols
of written line
and feelings
twined
so in the full
of the feel
the symbols
became
symbolic

but in the
touch of hand
a transformation
occurs
and the
electric of
the touch
reaches
and stretches
and pulls in
a visitor

one who is
not looking
but searching
and feeling
the pull
joins the two
and the
electric of
the touch
reaches
and stretches
and pulls in
a visitor

moment
by moment
line by line
threads
intertwined
and in
the magnetic
combined
the visitors
come
and share,
write
and care,
do
and dare

by stretch
and reach
of wisdom
and words,
ivy vines
then entwine
thoughts
of others,
sisters,
brothers,
who reach
and stretch
and touch
and teach

as the
visitors
cross the
breach
and come
to join
the magic

one by one
visitors all
come to call
and soon
none are
visitors
at all
but simply
and now
have come
to know
Ron's Vow

"A home without a wall,
Our haven without ends,
A circle we all call
Our Family of Friends"


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2001-03-18 03:33 PM


Karilea--yes! What a lovely explanation of family.
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-03-18 03:58 PM


YOUR SO COOL...
this poems so cool...
RONS SO COOL!!
its all good me girlie
from your pen to passion's walls ...
together we all walk the halls.
perfect Sun.

We wish ourselves beautiful,
we cry in the night.
Its not the love you fear ...
its the fall from the height.
~Edwin McCain~

OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
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3 posted 2001-03-18 04:07 PM


Such is this Haven where mind heart and poetry meet, becoming much more than the sum of its parts, wonderful write Sunshine, truly inspiring.

Regards,
Olias.

ethome
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4 posted 2001-03-18 04:15 PM


Oh you got me on that one Sunshine...you're a character! he he What a wonderful tribute to Passions...I love it all the way through.......

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Meadowmuse
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5 posted 2001-03-18 04:51 PM


Just lovely, Sunshine. Thank you for sharing this.

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Sunshine
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6 posted 2001-03-19 10:16 AM


Martie - aren't we all so very proud not only of Ron, but for the people who share in his beliefs?...

JM - you said it all - Ron's so COOL...

Thank you for reading, Olias!

Ethome - gotcha!

You're quite welcome Claire, thank you!

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