Open Poetry #12 |
Two Visitors |
Sunshine
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Two Visitors they met in one time in one place not looking just searching for the where feeling the pull pulling them together not searching just looking for the why once met a sharing found caring in the full in the feel of the symbols of written line and feelings twined so in the full of the feel the symbols became symbolic but in the touch of hand a transformation occurs and the electric of the touch reaches and stretches and pulls in a visitor one who is not looking but searching and feeling the pull joins the two and the electric of the touch reaches and stretches and pulls in a visitor moment by moment line by line threads intertwined and in the magnetic combined the visitors come and share, write and care, do and dare by stretch and reach of wisdom and words, ivy vines then entwine thoughts of others, sisters, brothers, who reach and stretch and touch and teach as the visitors cross the breach and come to join the magic one by one visitors all come to call and soon none are visitors at all but simply and now have come to know Ron's Vow "A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends" |
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Martie
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Karilea--yes! What a lovely explanation of family. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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YOUR SO COOL... this poems so cool... RONS SO COOL!! its all good me girlie from your pen to passion's walls ... together we all walk the halls. perfect Sun. We wish ourselves beautiful, |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Such is this Haven where mind heart and poetry meet, becoming much more than the sum of its parts, wonderful write Sunshine, truly inspiring. Regards, Olias. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh you got me on that one Sunshine...you're a character! he he What a wonderful tribute to Passions...I love it all the way through....... The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Just lovely, Sunshine. Thank you for sharing this. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sunshine
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Martie - aren't we all so very proud not only of Ron, but for the people who share in his beliefs?... JM - you said it all - Ron's so COOL... Thank you for reading, Olias! Ethome - gotcha! You're quite welcome Claire, thank you! |
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