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Discovering You
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
I listen quietly to your heart Dancing softly within your words as you express just a tiny bit of who you are Each writing a discovery A tiny piece of an intricate puzzle Beautiful and deep The original soul Matching no other A gift to see To understand I study each piece thoughtfully Tracing the edges gently with a fingertip The soft curves and sharp corners Placing it carefully within the puzzle of you inside my mind "When people show you who they are, believe them" |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A lovely little verse and I liked it. Joyce |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
The mystery of the other . . . Nicely captured, J A W, well done! I especially liked the last three lines: "Placing it carefully within the puzzle of you inside my mind" Krawdad |
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Raindrops Junior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 15 |
This is a wowee. Great poem!!!!!! I used to study everything around me. Mostly me I think. Just trying to be good enough. Anyhoo great poem, you seem to have your head on. Go girl. Best wishes Rosemary [This message has been edited by Raindrops (edited 03-18-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Dancing softly within your words as you express just a tiny bit of who you are Each writing a discovery A tiny piece of an intricate puzzle Beautiful and deep ============== yes...we can indeed discover so much with in the words of anothers poetry... wonderful conception of thought and poetic ponderings... well done!! jm We wish ourselves beautiful, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
You know where your at with everything you write. So i really don't think there is a puzzle...with knowing how the pieces fit. And by the you have been discovered since you been here..  Bernie Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 03-18-2001).] |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Thanks so much everyone! Bernie, I kinda meant discovering others through their poetry. But in truth, I suppose that does include myself. Though I appricate that it may look like I know where I am. *laughing* Raindrops, my head is on, it's just not always straight!  "When people show you who they are, believe them" |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I do that, too...try to put someone together through their words. This is great. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'I listen quietly to your heart Dancing softly within your words as you express just a tiny bit of who you are' Yes, poetry does blow our cover, doesn't it?? This is just excellent, JAW! Truly enjoyed this one... sp  do I believe we'd be better off apart? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sometimes, though. . . the pieces that we see aren't all that's there. . . that's when we have to look back in the box, and see the pieces that we've missed. . . excellent. . . wonderfully told. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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