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| Open Poetry #12 |
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'Too Much Time On Your Hands' |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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'Too Much Time On Your Hands' ~*Marge Tindal*~ Time has a way of Oozing through my skin. Out of reach, yet very Much within me, Underneath the tender Chasms filled with reminders of Heartfelt memories laying just out of Touch with the reality of you. I'm constantly reminded of just why this Meandering mind misses you so much. Evidently I'm out of the picture. Hell, it's Obvious I'm out of film. No need for two-for-one coupons, Yielding prints out of the focus Of you. Undeveloped they Remain,waiting for a photographer with a Heart to reprint All of my features into Negative responses to the Digitized replays of you Saying goodbye. *Inspired by Balladeer - Thank you, my friend. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Marge~ An intense acrostic, perfectly penned. I am sure that Balladeer will love this. The photograph theme is very effective, I sadly relate. Poems - rhyme or free-verse, senryus or haikus and even acrostics from you...is there anything that you cannot do? LOL You truly are the master of words, my friend  You bring so much variety into these forums and I love it!Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
WOW!!! wowowowowowow!! this is excellent writing! marge? marge marge marge!!!... geesh! *sigh*... i'm speechless. (and as you know that's really something for ME!) wow is all i can say.... *sigh*... i sigh a LOT lately... but this poem evoked a BIG sigh! *sighsighsigh*... [doreen takes a deep breath] could you tell i liked the poem? *sigh*... geesh |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ You are such a charmer, my friend. I love you. Thank you from my heart. Doreen~ Ohmigosh ! You like it THAT much ???? 'Speechless' ??? LOL @you ! I definitely thank you for the enthusiastic reply. Now ... let's get that breathing regulated ! Thanks, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wow....wow...littlest wow... I think I'll go try to find something insignificant to write about... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Great Marge...little different write from you. I know it reads sorta *sad* but I kinda got a chuckle out of it. Me weird I guess. Neat... jwesley |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
WOW Marge, this is exceptional... I enjoyed so much the format and the flow of intense expression... Hmmm, you make me smile when I see your gifts of poetry on screen Thank you for sharing *~coco~* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
From a simple response to a calendar post and look what you do with it. Superb penning my friend. I wonder what you could do with a response such as.............."Never have time to sleep" hint hint...  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is great...I love the images it brought to mind...sad yes but wow...very intense |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
After I read - before I read responses - I thought I could write something pithy - Wrong! Anything witty or adequately complimentary as I would have said it - has been said - (I wanted to say something close to what Doreen said) Anyhow - Yes - take this as effusive thanks and praise - it is how I intend it |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
a little different venue for you, Marge. [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 01-12-2001).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Margie~ very visual this little feature...well penned, well inspired Loved the read as always ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Our Balladeer is just sooooooooooo inspirational ! Thank you also for the 'E'. JWesley~ Thank you. And it also has a 'tickley' side to me as well. Dani~ I always appreciate your thoughts. Thanks, friend. MarkB~ *Hugs* Just might have to grab that line and give it a whirl. Love to you, sweet friend. Paula~ Thanks so much, lady. Wilfred~ I will take it under advisement. *wink* Kathleen~ Okay. Tracie~ Proper thanks always comes with a hug - *HUGS ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*WOW* Marge.....and once again *WOW* you always know how to suprise us with new creative styles....excellent my friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, this is wonderful, utterly utterly wonderful. And no love I'm not going to do it, as I say constantly to Kari, why when your sun is so bright light my candle. so no no no no, This truly is utterly beautiful, and I love it. Hugs and love girly take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Thank you so very, very much for enjoying this piece. Marsha~ I appreciate the thought you put into your replies, hon. ***To be INSPIRED by another poet is one of the perks of being at this site. Balladeer wrote - quote:I took one line out of that reply and was stirred to write this one. I appreciate the inspiration from all of my friends. Michael, I thank you for this one. *Hugs* and much love. Inspiration is just Too 'Special Passionate pause One on one Eternally grateful To the inspiration from a Really good friend You deserve a *Hug* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, you are not going to con me into this one. (No, no, no, ) You have been an inspiration from the very first, and will continue to be one always, but I'm still not going to do it. They are sooooooooo hard for me. I know you think I should shake my tail feathers again, but kid, these aren't easy, and Oooooooohhh don't give me that pouty look, I'll think about it. Okay, but don't nag me! Yea gods, if it's not Kari, it's Paula, and now you. Saints preserve me! As I said I'll think about it  Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
How I love opening a page of yours Marge, never know what I'll find....but I always know it will be wonderful. Love this! Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ LOL ! Read this response AFTER the fact ! You're a push-over for a challenge ! And you always rise to meet it. Bonnie~ Thank you so much for your wonderful comments. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Unearthing archived thoughts for a friend !  ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I would have replied to this earlier but.... "Time has a way of Oozing through my skin." However, I'm glad I did so I read you telling it like it is....good show Marge! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Marge.. how truly creative you are, my friend. This was outstanding. KateBe blessed! Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--how did I miss this beauty? Thanks for bringing it back up...it's wonderful! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Glad you found it and enjoyed it. Thank you, sweet poet.  Kate~ Just 'shows to go ya' what form a little inspiration can take.Thank you. Martie, my sweet sister-of-this-heart~ For you ... anything, my dear~  Thanks for liking it. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I know I don't fall asleep while staring at the blue pages. *G* So how could I have missed this one? LOL. I love it, Marge... and have so much appreciation for a talent that can turn the simplest phrase into such excellent poetry. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ Well, don't feel 'rained on' ... there's soooooo much out here to see. Love ya', gal~ Have a great day .. we're getting much needed RAIN ! Glad you enjoyed this little inspiration. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- You know I love this! Especially this part... "Evidently I'm out of the picture. Hell, it's Obvious I'm out of film. No need for two-for-one coupons" Those lines speak volumes! Isn't it so nice to be inspired by a fellow poet? Wonderful, my friend!  Big hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-15-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Little friend ... You know, cause you always just know ... Thank you for being here~ How I appreciate you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just awesome! |
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