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Kerri S
Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 61
Rhode Island

0 posted 2001-03-17 11:16 AM

Enchanted Forest

Candles give me light
and the rivers sing
a song,
smell of cinnamon
enchants the mood
the wind whispers
your name and
beckons for you,
Autumn leaves
fall and makes a
bed for lovers to
lay and rest their
heads,
feel the passion
burn inside, feel
the lust as I make
you mine,
enchanted forest a
realm for which
you can not hide
it lives inside you
and will not die,
let the passion burn
like a fire in the wind,
let the rivers over flow
and consume you within,
let my body become
one with yours,
give me this and
I'll still want more

Kerri

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-03-17 11:31 AM

Want away...this is delightful...

Jellybean King
Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 153
Jelly, Bean

2 posted 2001-03-17 12:52 PM

Beautiful imagery...your words gently roll, like water over smooth stones!

Jellybean King

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-03-17 01:49 PM

Kerri~
The imagery is dynamic !
Enjoyed the render.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-03-17 07:33 PM

please. . . more. . .

this is excellent. . . I love it. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2001-03-17 08:48 PM

smell of cinnamon
enchants the mood
the wind whispers
your name and
beckons for you,
Autumn leaves
fall and makes a
bed for lovers to
lay and rest their
heads,
feel the passion
burn inside, feel
the lust as I make
you mine,
enchanted forest a
realm for which
you can not hide
it lives inside you
and will not die,
let the passion burn
like a fire in the wind,
let the rivers over flow
===================

this is wonderful writing...
such well done imagery and flow
and passionate, sensual emotions laced thru out the sights and smells...
very nice write Kerry...enjoyed this muchly

We wish ourselves beautiful,
we cry in the night.
Its not the love you fear ...
its the fall from the height.
~Edwin McCain~

Kerri S
Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 61
Rhode Island

6 posted 2001-03-19 09:54 AM

Sven and Janet, Thank you very much for your wonderful praise on this poem.

To everyone Thank you for making me feel so very welcome and at home at Passions

Love Kerri

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