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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Moments There are moments I feel her near Her aura’s balm, her simple charms Moments of private persevere The best is when she’s in my arms. I feel her in my minds foray That pleasures me like contraband. In moments of the night and day Just touching hands in understand. She fills my fantasy with goal And opens up the door to more Plants flowers in the soil of soul Turns hours into evermore. She is my genii and my vamp She is the reeve my wishes weave. She is the rainbow and the ramp She is to me the woman Eve. These are the moments that I steal The moments that I pray come real. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
that all your prayers shall be answered is what I will send forth for you....thank you for blessing us again....a delight... and a keeper... |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
"She is to me the woman Eve"........You have captured so much in this, especially in this line. Beautiful, so very beautiful. I applaud, Sy! "When people show you who they are, believe them" ~Maya Angelou~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There are moments I feel her near Her aura’s balm, her simple charms Moments of private persevere The best is when she’s in my arms. I feel her in my minds foray That pleasures me like contraband. In moments of the night and day Just touching hands in understand. ==================== Plants flowers in the soil of soul Turns hours into evermore. ==================== She is the rainbow and the ramp She is to me the woman Eve. These are the moments that I steal The moments that I pray come real. ========================= *sigh* ... and "she" inspires great things in you... this is such a sweet treat of verse and rhyme divine. "She is the rainbow and the ramp" what a groovy line that is Sy-babes... your poetry is like Rainbow confetti in my day... let it pour on me baby *L* very cool write sweet Sy.  *ww*  meSprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'll add my prayers to yours, Seymour... may all your dreams come true. *S* This is beautiful! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
How beautiful the thoughts in this!!! I also hope your wishes come true.......always!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Thank you sweet. *L* Sunnyone, And thank you for the read and wonderful comment. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sir Sy, I see that L ve is in the air! A beautiful, enchanting tribute to her!~Take care, Melissa~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Your delight is my delight. *L* Just a Woman, Beautiful comment thank you so much. JM, You are my rainbow and my ramp and I am Randy just a tramp. Winkiewinkie Stinky Melissa, With me love is always in the air. *L* |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Beautifully done. I can relate, just wanting the real me to stand up. LOLRed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Red-uni, Thanks for the relate and beautiful. |
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