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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-03-16 11:45 AM


Moments

There are moments I feel her near
Her aura’s balm, her simple charms
Moments of private persevere
The best is when she’s in my arms.

I feel her in my minds foray
That pleasures me like contraband.
In moments of the night and day
Just touching hands in understand.

She fills my fantasy with goal
And opens up the door to more
Plants flowers in the soil of soul
Turns hours into evermore.

She is my genii and my vamp
She is the reeve my wishes weave.
She is the rainbow and the ramp
She is to me the woman Eve.

These are the moments that I steal
The moments that I pray come real.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-03-16 11:48 AM


that all your prayers shall be answered is what I will send forth for you....thank you for blessing us again....a delight...

and a keeper...

Just A Woman
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2 posted 2001-03-16 12:16 PM


"She is to me the woman Eve"........You have captured so much in this, especially in this line.
Beautiful, so very beautiful.

I applaud, Sy!

"When people show you who they are, believe them"

~Maya Angelou~

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2001-03-16 12:50 PM


There are moments I feel her near
Her aura’s balm, her simple charms
Moments of private persevere
The best is when she’s in my arms.

I feel her in my minds foray
That pleasures me like contraband.
In moments of the night and day
Just touching hands in understand.
====================
Plants flowers in the soil of soul
Turns hours into evermore.
====================
She is the rainbow and the ramp
She is to me the woman Eve.

These are the moments that I steal
The moments that I pray come real.
=========================

*sigh* ...
and "she" inspires great things in you...
this is such a sweet treat of verse and rhyme divine.

"She is the rainbow and the ramp"

what a groovy line that is Sy-babes...

your poetry is like Rainbow confetti in my day...
let it pour on me baby *L*
very cool write sweet Sy.
*ww* me


Sprayed across my heart and hers
Danced butterflies in the wild
This angel, this woman ,
who loves me with the innocence of a child.
~DeVante~

suthern
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4 posted 2001-03-19 09:26 AM


I'll add my prayers to yours, Seymour... may all your dreams come true. *S* This is beautiful!
Sunnyone
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5 posted 2001-03-19 09:28 AM


How beautiful the thoughts in this!!! I also hope your wishes come true.......always!!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!




Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2001-03-19 09:32 AM


Suthern,
Thank you sweet. *L*

Sunnyone,
And thank you for the read and wonderful comment.

Honeybee
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7 posted 2001-03-19 09:33 AM



Sir Sy, I see that L ve is in the air! A beautiful, enchanting tribute to her!~

Take care,
Melissa~

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2001-03-19 09:42 AM


Sunshine,
Your delight is my delight. *L*

Just a Woman,
Beautiful comment thank you so much.

JM,
You are my rainbow and my ramp
and I am Randy just a tramp.
Winkiewinkie Stinky

Melissa,
With me love is always in the air. *L*

Red-uni
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9 posted 2001-03-19 09:51 AM


Beautifully done. I can relate, just wanting the real me to stand up. LOL
Red

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
10 posted 2001-03-19 09:58 AM


Red-uni,
Thanks for the relate and beautiful.

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