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Toerag
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0 posted 2001-03-17 10:06 AM


The mouths
Of Stewardesses
On Aeroplanes
Are the most standard
Mouths in the world
I stare agogged
At their springtime
Doublespearminted smiles
As they teach me all about
The oxygen mask

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1 posted 2001-03-17 10:55 AM


you can't get me on another airplane........... Hey Toe.......what's shakin?! SEA
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2001-03-17 11:06 AM


Toerag,
And you better pay attention or you'll be putting the wrong flask sorry I mean mask to your mouth. Nice one.

inot2B
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3 posted 2001-03-17 12:19 PM


Toerag, you must fly IN the plane not ON the plane.
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4 posted 2001-03-17 03:08 PM


But as soon as they finish their canned safety spiel, you'll have them laughing and keeping you supplied with free drinks and offers for "later"... so be patient just a moment more! LOL

Now... get off that plane for a few minutes and stick around! *G*

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5 posted 2001-03-17 10:29 PM


They are only living out every woman's dream...to put a mask over that ugly beak!!
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6 posted 2001-03-19 08:42 PM


Toerag,

I like your use of aeroplane and agogged. A curious bit of poetry ~ thanks for it. (o:

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Mabel A. Dilley
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7 posted 2001-03-19 09:09 PM


A very fun write from a poet who sounds as if he may be a frequent flyer. LOL

"I am not now that which I have been."

Local Rebel
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8 posted 2001-03-19 11:34 PM


hey..

nice free verse Buzz...

bravo


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