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Run Silent Run Deep
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Run Silent Run Deep |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Run Silent Run Deep Retrospection swept in sweep Down and deep into my sleep Tiling out the ground about Till it route the right thought out. Washed upon far shores of ebb Shook my head to clear the web. Held me up to ridicule And sanctioned me a damn fool. Why did you wait, let her fly This Goddess this butterfly You let her fly, sigh away Beyond a year and a day. Now you wile away the time Writing verse and nonsense rhyme. Pining to the sky above Yearning for a long lost love. She is gone will not return No matter your churn or yearn. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Seymour~ Your title grabbed me - from long ago memories. Do you remember that wonderful movie ? Still among my classic favorites. Well ... I need to say I enjoyed this read and the memories it stirred. I'll take your 'nonsense rhyme' anytime ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Nice job Sy...I see you haven't gone nuts like me yet....congratulations! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is wrenching....and you again dismiss my mind of words.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 Beautiful butterfly now gone...but never forgotten any verse of her...will not ever be words misbegotten Engrave her name ... in your golden rhyme etch your love unending ... in sands of time Tho fate took her from you ... in a moment cruel holding on to the love ... does not deem you a fool Recite her in your poetry ... enchant us with her memory carve your love in destiny ... set your sweet butterfly free  love this one Sy-babes ... a sigh from Sy that makes us cry  *winkiewinkie*  meWe wish ourselves beautiful, we cry in the night. Its not the love you fear ... its the fall from the height. ~Edwin McCain~ [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 03-17-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I have the book of that title Seymour... I don't think it is so much we let them go...it is more like they are leaving no matter what we do and whether we like it or not...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Yes I do and it was one of my favorites. Thanks for the beautiful comment. Toe, Thanks for the read and comment, nice to see you posting again. Sunshine, Love you too. *L* JM, Randy wants to know the address of the butterflies. Wonderful response winkiewinkie Stinky James, I think you are right, but there are plenty of butterflies. Thanks for the drop bye. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
For Randy *L* http://wsphotofews.excite.com/017/lu/rB/LL/S880657.jpg *winkiewinkie*  meWe wish ourselves beautiful, |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
T'were they be the right one, they'd be a'stayin' no matter what. Yearn no more, but smile and say hello to a new lassie. Julian Lester |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sy...you write the poetry that gives me "butterfly bumps" This is awesome!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Julian, Hello, welcome and you are right. Thank you so much for the read. Butterfly, And you write replies that are awesome and give me butterfly bumps. *L* |
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