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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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How sweet it was, to be seen, to hear delight and my friend scream, "THERE you are! Where HAVE you been???" and dancing hugs between old friends. I was so moved I shed a tear-- he gripped my hands "so glad you're here." The club was different from recall The bar was round, not near the wall... they added windows, acoustic tile and Palm Beach Pink and dark green wild. So many nights I'd passed in there so many ghosts to glimpse,in air... I wanted just to meet the band, delight of ears to hear, "Hey STAN! Who is this, that you've got with you? Bring her here and introduce..." And so I met then everyone and all their girls in gathered fun. So began familiar night-- fundelicious--spark of light shoring up my very soul an alchemy of memories gold. And yes I danced and laughed real loud, drinks appeared in line for me soon I hugged new friends sincere and someone named me "atmosphere"... and called me sweet enough to eat.  And together, all- we danced, and swung our hair beneath the fans stories within tales unfold-- for just one night I was not old. No one's mother, no one's wife-- fundelicious taste of life. "Tell me you'll come back again. No cover--and the drinks unend... and if there's any more like you? Tell them that they're welcome too." So yes, tonight I cried alot-- remembering me that I'd forgot and now the part I like best? They deemed me a "professional guest..." (I had a GREAT time tonight!!!)  " Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go." T.S. Eliot |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow! tonight really lifted your spirits...I got drunk reading this! You coined a word too...fundelicious...well! I had so much fun reading this....come back again!....Miss Atmosphere...........have a nice day too! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I'm SO glad you had a good time!!! Makes you want to do it again right? And you shall be our Princess Fundelicious!!!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, This is a fundelicious poem, Enjoyed. |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Guess we were doing shots together, there also, and wasn't that room also spinning... Bernie Bernie Slicker |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
bring me with you next time...... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And so I met then everyone and all their girls in gathered fun. So began familiar night-- fundelicious--spark of light shoring up my very soul an alchemy of memories gold. And yes I danced and laughed real loud, drinks appeared in line for me soon I hugged new friends sincere and someone named me "atmosphere"... and called me sweet enough to eat. And together, all- we danced, and swung our hair beneath the fans stories within tales unfold-- for just one night I was not old. No one's mother, no one's wife-- fundelicious taste of life. ========================= and so now they know too and yes you are... and yer beautiful when your smiling very cool me twin ... and pick me up when ya swing by to get Dor. hugs girlie me We wish ourselves beautiful, |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LOL girlie can I be the " one just like you?" this sounds like just the kind of evening I am in need of... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
YAWN...wow...good morning everybody! Oh. er, afternoon...  I wake up and it's like the party is still going on! Thank you so much and of course you are welcome to join me anytime! "Poets Party Perfectly" (hmmm...alliteration?) "Poets Party Perfectly Hearty" ( okay, okay, just say "nice ASSonance!  )Thank you all! and now I am off in search of my coffee. Yowser! Just a word of caution? If you have ever been treated for whiplash? You SHOULD cease and desist all headbanging activity effective immediately. OW...(now where's my Lodine?) serenity exits, muttering to herself... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Absolute thanks for taking me to your reunion with you! What a wonderful experience...to go back to being young, yet with all the wisdom life can bring still intact. I'm certain that's why you had fun, you let yourself be you all the way! Well done poem. When I saw your title, I immediately was inspired to a poem, the one called "It's a Dilly." I wrote it quickly before reading your poem, so you know, especially when you read it, that is was only your title that sent me off. Heh-heh, it's nothing like this fantastic piece of memory-making! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you Virginia...I loved the way you summed that up for me...much gratitude for the read...and honored to be an inspiration, even indirectly. HUGS. |
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