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Auguste

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By the sea

0 posted 2001-03-16 08:33 PM

Stirring Embers

by Michael Auguste

Embers stirring, turning, burning
pushing back the winter's chill.
Cozy, cuddled, passions yearning,
lovers find they've little will.

Breath on hair and moist partaking,
painted in fire's amber light.
Hours spent, no want of waking,
this could be unending night.

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-03-16 08:42 PM

Auguste, you are on a roll tonight....and your embers are sparking!

Martie

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2 posted 2001-03-16 09:16 PM

Michael--This is romantic, tender, and softly sensual...very lovely!

Marge Tindal

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3 posted 2001-03-16 10:34 PM

MichaelA~
Stirs my embers !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Auguste

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By the sea

4 posted 2001-03-16 10:43 PM

Sunshine,

Thanks for the "sparking" and I'm glad you liked this.

Martie,

You're comments are always so sweet. Thank you.

Marge,

(laughing) You cracked my up with your comments. I'm glad your embers are in good shape, my friend, and that you enjoyed this little poem.

Thanks all,

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Greeneyes

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5 posted 2001-03-16 10:44 PM

absolutely beautiful.....WOW Michael...

Greeneyes~

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Without you I find myself
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Auguste

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By the sea

6 posted 2001-03-16 10:49 PM

Greeneyes,

Hi and thanks for the "Wow." I'm so glad you liked this. :-) Peace and good wishes.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2001-03-18 01:19 AM

Breath on hair and moist partaking,
painted in fire's amber light.
Hours spent, no want of waking,
this could be unending night.
===============

what a lovely passionate verse that is...
wonderful writing ... superb cadence.
enjoyed this jewel

We wish ourselves beautiful,
we cry in the night.
Its not the love you fear ...
its the fall from the height.
~Edwin McCain~

Auguste

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By the sea

8 posted 2001-03-18 07:07 PM

Janet Marie,

Thank you for the kind words. I'm vey glad you enjoyed this one.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Suetang
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9 posted 2001-04-02 06:05 PM

This was so very beautifual and so very romantic Michael....what a lovely read by the warmth of the fire's glow! Thanks so much....Sue

Suetang

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