Open Poetry #12 |
My Treasured Friend |
Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
My Treasured Friend Of treasures I do value most, this heart that opens when I'm near. I enter without chaperone. She knows she has no need of fear. Though miles apart, I hear her laugh and feel her hand upon my own. A close embrace with words she says, this tender friendship that has grown. As swollen shadows grow with night and cast their pall upon my breast, soft whispers in the dark she speaks. that help massage my soul to rest. Her words, poetic images, are gifts, they're treasures I will keep. She knows they'll not escape the chest, to ever give her cause to weep. I love this friend for who she is. She truly is a work of art. I hope these words in some small way have placed my kiss upon her heart. Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
What a lovely poem and I hope your friend reads it and is impressed, as I am! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is a beautiful and loving poem, Michael...your friend is blessed to have you. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You must have lots of friends with such beguiling words. Joyce |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I think they have placed a kiss she'll hold tightly in her dreams. *S* This is lovely! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Betty, Thanks and yes, my friend has read it. Martie, Yes, I do love this friend. She really is a treasure. Thanks and I'm glad you liked this one. Joyce, No, not lots of friends at all. Only a few close ones. Thanks for reading this. Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
suthern, What a perfectly lovely thing to say. I hope you're right. Thank you. Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Michael, I'm sure each and every one of your friends will relate to this and feel it is their own. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
i loved this one very much ..it says what's in the heart of evry true friends and it came striaght from the heart ...i really did enjoy it thanx WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL) |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Dee, Yes, I hope all of my friends feel that way, because they certainly are treasured by me, as are you. Thank you. DreamLess, Yes, it's straight from the heart. Thank you for enjoying this. Michael Proust- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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