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Who's Gonna Hold You, Darling ?
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Who's Gonna Hold You, Darling ? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Who's Gonna Hold You, Darling ? ~*Marge Tindal*~ Who's gonna hold you darling, when those teardrops start falling ? Who's gonna kiss you and swear that they've missed you and wipe all your teardrops away ? Who's gonna fold you in strong arms and hold you whispering sweet kisses 'til dawn ? When the sun rises, who's gonna offer surprises of sunbeams to dance on the lawn ? Who's gonna love you forever, promising to forget you never ? Who's gonna be here tomorrow, sheltering you from all of life's sorrow ? Just so you'll be knowing it's nowhere I'm going, I'm gonna love you forever, darling ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Marge, forever love...what a dream come true! A pleasure to read you, once again. Robert Joseph |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oops...thought this was going one way, and you pulled the rug out... well done! Got me! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You speak of true love and devotion so sweetly!  Wonderful sentiment and flow. Enjoyed the read.Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Who's gonna fold you in strong arms and hold you whispering sweet kisses 'til dawn?' Beautiful, Marge, just beautiful! I love it! sp  I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Marge--lovely poem, its always warming to read your words, like a hug...beautiful write. Poeminister |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This piece is delightful and lovely written Marge....wonderful write!!!! Nathan |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Who's going to reply to this melodious rhyme with smiles so bright from this read which has brought much delight... *~coco~* that's who... loved the poem Marge [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 01-15-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Marge glad you have someone to hold on tight to...thought about the "Cars" song after reading this..."Who's gonna drive your car tonight? James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RJ~ Thank you, hon. It's always a pleasure to share with you. Karilea~ LOL ! Gotta watch that bottom step, sugar ! *wink* Melissa~ Love and devotion ARE sweet - so very, very sweet and real. Thank you always for the smile in your friendship. SnowPants~ Good to see you. Thank you so much for the kind comments. PoeMinister~ Awww ! You say the nicest things. *HUG* Nate, my friend~ So very pleased you enjoyed it. Dani~ Got you bursting into rhyme AND a smile - that's two for two on the night ! *smiling here* James~ Thank you ! LOL ! I'm driving, babe ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
How wonderful of you to take the e-mail you sent me and make a poem out of it!! You are awesome!!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Blabberdeer ! ! And you said you didn't tell ! !  But, now that it's out ... I'm glad you like it. *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Loved this poem, such a heart felt work of art. Love and light, Richard |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MaxTec~ Thank you. Shucks, I feel that way about all of them ! *wink* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Forever is for always Loving this Margie ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
That is why you are like the angel in our pockets.........we know you are going to be there. Wonderful write my friend. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Wow,Marge,loved the words of this poem |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Yes, I would have known that you would, sweet poet. MarkB~ Awwww ! You're such a sweetheart ! Yep, ya' are ! VanDana~ Thank you, honey. I love knowing that you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Marge, this is so good. Loved it and it makes me feel good, too. Hugs for you, ME |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge..*wow* glad that I could make it to catch this wondrous piece of love. love it my friend....and excellent penned as always. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
WELL DONE MARGE WE CAN ALWAYS COUNT ON YOU TO GIVE US NEW THOUGHTS TO PONDER GUESS THE LINEUP TO HOLD YOU IS FORVER<><> |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely as a song, Marge, on a spring day! Corinne |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Aww Marge..Love forever from you, what more could he want!! Such a sweet treat to come here and read your work..You are simply too cute!! Make me smile when I need it, you do!! Hugs ~LL~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, truly delightful, and yes of course I love it. One of your utter wonders love Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
love is a grand feeling, indeed you have shared your heart with this, and us....lovely marge.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MotherEarth~ I truly like knowing it made you 'feel good'. Thanks, my friend. Charisma~ I'm just awfully glad you are hear dear. Thank you. SoaringEagle~~> Well, my love - if that's true - Your number is up cause you're #1 with me ! Corinne~ Thanks, gal. Hope it caught you singing. LadyLightning~ Such a nice reply and I sincerely appreciate it. Marsha~ Yes, of course you do, luv. And you are such a dear to say so. GreenEyes~ It is, isn't it hon ? Thank you for enjoying a slice of my heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ it's impossible not to love this gem! It's wonderful!! -SEA |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Marge~ Never ceasing to amaze me. It was so sweet, it belongs in our V-Day issue of Passions. I loved every line .~Susie "Many people hear voices when no one is there. Some of them are called mad and are shut up in rooms where they stare at walls all day. Others are call |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Well, you just go right ahead - I thank you, sweetie. Angel~ What a wonderful thing for you to say. Thank you so very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh yes, everyone belongs to one another I believe, and you two definitely belong to each other! This was a very lovely poem, Marge! May true love forever blossom in you and your love! Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Noah~ It's such a pleasure to share writings from the heart with others. I'm really appreciative of your replies. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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