Open Poetry #12 |
My "Once Upon a Time..." |
Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
My "Once upon a time.." began long ago where carefree was as close as it would ever be and falling in love was sometimes a daily event. Where the girls would usually return a flirtatious smile with twinkling eyes that turned my cherry heart into warm, quivering Jello. Where the shy tongue-tied approach was considered by some, a sign of loving tenderness rather than a weak spirit. Where the ladies could be pals, drinking buddies, confidants or lovers. Or even a loving friend where a gentle embrace was sometimes more important than going all the way. Where things lost tried to leave me empty yet still what always remained was a burning want deep inside that fired a constant search for everlasting love. My "Once upon a time..." began long ago where friendships stretched further than the dollars I made and my old friend, loneliness helped me to find you. "HEY, DON'T THROW THAT AWAY, I MIGHT NEED IT SOMEDAY!!!" Packratmike [This message has been edited by Packratmike (edited 03-18-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
tender....romantic....kind....a huggy feel to a wonderful write.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your poem Mike...James |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Thanks Sunshine and James, but I believe this one is going down like the Titanic! (Where's that Leonardo kid when you need him???!!!) |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
You're so alright...for a guy! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very nice, so very, very nice. Well woven! |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
JLR....from this poem's viewpoint, I will most definitely accept that as a compliment. Thank you. VAS...Thank you so much. This one seemed so easy for me. Mike |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Mike...this is fantastic...wish more guys thought along these lines...LOL and like JLR said...you are alright HUGS |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Thanks Paula and ***HUGS***back atcha!!! Mike |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mike, I like this, lots! Sandra |
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